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Princess Flurry Heart, now a teenager, wants to have the chance to make a difference in Equestria, like the rest of the royal family. When she does get that chance, she finds that royal responsibilities may be a little tougher than she thought.

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At long last, a story that finally features Flurry Heart in your universe!

8149713 I figured it was about time I added Flurry to the mythos.

This will be fun. Lets see how this goes for Flurry.

8150118 And what's more, we also get to see the daughter of Sunburst and Starlight Glimmer. Do you have a love interest planned for Flurry Heart?

8150135 Maybe. You'll just have to wait and see...

How old is anthem here? Just curiosity

8150323 A couple of years younger than Flurry. He's recently turned fifteen in this time frame.

Nice to see a older Flurry action. Though I do wonder what kind of Princess she would be?

welcome back, bluecat! how long has it been since ya wrote? oh yeah, i also talk like sans now, if ya get my reference. good job with the story so far!

Good thing Flurry never heard of Charles XII of Sweden, Carolus Rex, admittedly his achievements didn't long survive him and he himself only had a little more than a score of years after taking the throne at the age of 15.

8150994 Hey, are Twilight and Flash still married in this universe? I wonder if Flurry will mention her aunt and uncle in the story?

8155067 What buggers me is that the last time Anthem was featured in the story, he's already married with Winter. Does this take place sometime before "Summer Love"? (The story where Anthem meets, falls in love with and marries her).

This continuity throws my mind off with confusion :pinkiesick::scootangel::rainbowdetermined2::rainbowderp:

8165450 Yes, this does take place before that, since Flurry and Anthem are both teenagers here.

That was a good first assignment for Princess Flurry Heart.

Nice chapter! It's good to see Flurry take charge of the situation as a royal. I wonder what Discord has been up to in this future era of peace. I hope we find out what happens next soon.

If Flurry Heart was voiced, what would she sound like?

8171375 If it were up to me, she'd be voiced by Tania Gunadi (the voice of Miko in Transformers: Prime).

So you understand I can't hang out right.

Question Mark needed

We don't care about what ponies 'aapreciate'

appreciate

Pit Prop had jumped Fang from behind, using the handle of his pickax to force his jews open,

jaws




I wish Flurry attempted to fight. Oh, it would be really cool if she severally injured somepony(ies), and had to hide it from everypony but had a spiritual journey with a mysterious pony who helped her injure said ponies and she becomes super badass and has to suddenly defend her him and Her parents are like, 'Flurry, move out of the way' and she's all like, 'I got this guys' and does a bunch of super badass stuff. But Anyway, that's a story for another day.

But, yeah, really like this story. Keep up the good work and add lots of plot twist. :twistnerd: :raritywink:

8171924 I take it you meant "severely injured".

Flurry's heard enough stories about her aunt's exploits to know that violence isn't the best response. Given the choice, she'll try to defuse a bad situation with words, like Twilight.

Another great chapter!

I'm loving this and feels like the show. The best part is the friendship between Flurry and Moonbeam, they are more like sisters which is really sweet.

Who are Gothic and Constell? Are they part of the royal guard?

8204651 They're Luna's husband and daughter, from my earlier stories.

"A pony your age should know to respect her betters."

She already does, Jet Set. You and your wife simply don't come under that. :ajsmug::rainbowwild::raritywink::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile::yay:

And hopefully neither of you had filled up on snacks too much, because you both got your 'just des(s)erts' by the end! :pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh::eeyup::moustache:

Just a question, what time in your universe this story happen?

8205543 Seventeen years from the show's present.

You know, Dodger might serve as a possible love interest for Flurry in the future, unless you've already planned for some other stallion to be her love interest.

8228549 Let's just say I have a few ideas in that regard...

Poor Discord... What is with everyone so mean to him?

I would be not just nice but be a great friend to him. Laugh, talk, and hang out Discord is my favorite character and sad to see kids mean to him.

Anywho, I like this chapter and felt like an episode for sure.

I do hope Flurry will be able to solve one of the upcoming situations without Discord's help.

8229957 Don't worry. Discord won't be appearing too often.

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Yeah, that's good.
Not so much because I dislike him (I don't), but more because this IS supposed to be Flurry's story.

That was quite a fun chapter with Flurry and Moonbeam spending time with extended family.

Is this really part of a series? Which one of your stories is the first one?

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This story is more of a standalone thing. It has elements from some of my earlier stories, but it can still be read on its own.

Fun chapter, nice family visit. Also, Pip and Diamond? I didn't expect that pair.

Shipping Dusk and Moongleam!

8255454
Dusk already likes Dazzle, remember? Plus they get married when they're older. Moongleam has no love interest yet.

For most of his foalhood, Pipsqueak had lived up to his name. But as he entered his teens, he experienced a number of growth spurts. He went from being the shortest colt in his class to one of the tallest. He had also grown quite handsome, catching the eye of several young mares. But none more so than Diamond Tiara. She was smitten with the now-ironically-named Pipsqueak, but was uncomfortable admitting it, much less acting on it. Fortunately, she had the help of a certain trio of classmates...

But that is a story for another time.

OOOOOHHH I'm smelling a next story

"Good morning to you too." Pipsqueak smiled. He then indicated the mare beside him. "Allow me to introduce you both to my wife, Diamond Tiara. She's, ah... just visiting me at work." He blushed lightly.

I've been impaled by the shipping harpoon!

That was an awesome chapter, though I was expecting a ship tease between Spike and Ember, but I suppose that may happen in the future.

Also, you left out a line for Moonbeam in one section:

"Nice work." Ember grinned.

"Nothing?" Flurry smiled. "It was amazing how you stood up to that bully! I'm so proud of you, Moony!" She hugged her best friend.

Between these two lines is where Moonbeam should have said "Aw, it was nothing."

Also, if you don't mind, I think that Garble and his buddies are going to have their family jewels dislodge by Lord Ember for attempting to attack Flurry Heart and Moonbeam! LOL

8287042
Thanks. I did put in a little ship tease on Ember's side, but in a subtle way.

8287081
Okay, I'll have to look into it again. Also what did you think about that joke I made at the end?

8258339
I'd prefer Trickster with Moonbeam.

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