One of the pitfalls of being immortal is outliving those you know. And all you have left are memories...
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Is this story still coherent with the alternate universe you've created?
YES! BTW Bluecat thanks for responding to my comment. I've been reading since before I got my account!
7881039 In a way, but it's a standalone story, so it won't be getting mentioned elsewhere.
It made me cry....that never happens....
7881039 No, i believe not. Almost none of the characters from Bluecatcinema's alt. universe, aside from Ivy, appeared. And Bluecatcinema did mention that it's not getting mentioned elsewhere.
Ah, immortality. One of the best stories I've read so far about it was The Great Alicorn Hunt, in which the two alicorn sisters seek to stop ponies dying of old age.... By ascending them (or some other method but it hasn't reached that point yet). Currently at Chapter 53, and so far the Mane Six, Shining Armor, the CMC, and a bunch of OCs have become alicorns. That fanfic was basically a way of saying "hey, immortality sucks if only a handful are able to enjoy it, so let's try and get everyone to be immortal!" Kind of crazy I know, but sometimes crazy works. By the way, it's in an AU where alicorns live forever if nothing unnatural like non-age-related disease or accidents happen to them. Recommended read, it's pretty funny. Only like 5-10% of the chapters are serious/dark stuff. Its on archiveofourown. org if anyone wants to find it.
But yeah, I wish that Bluecatcinema's OCs make a return. Especially in a romance story. I'd love to see Prince Dusk Glow and Dazzle again, or maybe Miracle to see how her crush on Spike is developing.
Whew, that was a long one.
The story wasn't bad, in fact it was written rather well, but by god has this idea been done to death so much that it became very predictable. It became dull after I realized it's hitting all the usual cliché notes I've seen in other fics like this one.
Not bad, but not original or creative at all.