Crossover with marvel universe, mainly the Thor Mythos. Loki stands trial for his crimes and is banished from Asgard to a place where he can learn the true value of loyalty and mercy with his granddaughters, Celestia and Luna princesses of Equestria.
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The change was so subtle that they didn't notice at first. It was only when his voice changed to a silken, honeyed, almost sultry tone that could enthrall anyone -regardless of gender or species- that they noticed that he -now a she- was not the same as before.
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artefacts
It should also be noted that -as far as i'm concerned- an artefact is a relic of a long-gone civilization, or something similar. An artifact is more like a powerful magical item that existed for a very long time, but still reains its power or significance.
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achieves, worshippers, your
no need for that and
Also, too. Many. Commas.
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Sorry about the mistakes, still without a proofreader.
Are you interested in be a proofreader for this story?
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Also
artifact
noun [ C ] UK /ˈɑː.tə.fækt/ US /ˈɑːr.t̬ə.fækt/
US spelling of artefact
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Sorry about the commas, we use them a lot in portuguese (my native language).
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I tried the ‘Proofreader Group’ but all the ones tied were either too busy and declined my request or didn’t respond at all.
The only one that accepted my request said he would do it but after that he didn’t respond to any of my messages, that was a week ago.
I was about to post a request for a proofreader on their forum when I saw your comment and it reminded me of your offer.
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1) I have made the offer to several others.
2) I said "as far as I'm concerned". It's a good way to separate the two definitions.
3) I can understand that.
4) If you need it, I'd be glad to provide it.