Crossover with marvel universe, mainly the Thor Mythos. Loki stands trial for his crimes and is banished from Asgard to a place where he can learn the true value of loyalty and mercy with his granddaughters, Celestia and Luna princesses of Equestria.
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The pictures are cool and all, but please, stop including them in the text of the story. It is very hard to read around the images.
use links if you must, hyperlink the words you wish to illustrate, but stop the inline images.
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I suggest "Ah think we should"
talk about
princess's, since it was only Celestia answering
i believe you mean shucks.
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Sorry for the mistakes. English is neither my first nor my main language.
Also I was in a hurry at the time, I fixed most mistakes.
For the context in the universe of my story:
Equestria is the name of both the continent and their kingdom, well princessdom. Statera one of the names of the dimension and the world, like Midgard or Asgard, in marvel comics it’s the name of both the world and the dimension they are in. On a side note, different species have different names for the planet but ponies call it Equestria anyway.
Celestia's arrogance came from the fact that she thought she knew that was best for her sister and all her subjects. In Luna’s case it is because of an age gap, Celestia was in her late-teens when luna was born, at least in my story.
Celestia and Luna have the same father but different mothers and each of the mothers had other foals. One of which is the ancestor of Prince Blueblood, that my way of explaining how he is Celestia and Luna’s (many times ‘great’)-grandnephew even if they call him just nephew.
Celestia is natural born alicorn and that’s because she is Sleipnir’s offspring with a mare from Statera, the land wasn’t called Equestria yet, the same applies to Luna. The only other way for alicorns to exist is when ponies go through ‘ascension’. In this case being a alicorn is like being a demigod it’s a status that can be archived with enough power and/or effort and by fulfilling certain requirements.
Just because they are alicorns doesn’t mean that they have genes from all the three tribes. Besides, magic can interfere and interact with their physiology so a trait like being either a pegasus or a unicorn can appear in a long line of earth ponies. The three tribes are subspecies but magic complicates things.
Celestia and Luna defeated Sombra but they did it together and I doubt it was on their first attempt. Same applies to Discord but this time even together they couldn’t defeat him it took finding and using the Elements of Harmony to accomplish that.
As for the ‘unnatural powers’, Sombra used hate and fear to fuel his magic and he used that magic to bend the Crystal Empire and his inhabitants to his will. On the alternative timeline he even had a mind controlled army of (I assume) slaves.
Discord bends and twist reality, enough said. Besides, he can corrupt the minds of other if he wants, he did it with the mane six in “The Return of Harmony” after all.
It isn’t impossible to feel alone in a crowd especially for Celestia to her subjects she is a immortal ruler, a idol to worship, and a goddess in their eyes not a friend. Besides, any friends that she could have would live a century at most. I’m not saying she didn't have friends but none of them could sympathize with her like her sister.
Thanks for the advice.
He picture of Loki in his alicorn form is broken...
Just a quick note on the names; Nottmani sounds grammatically wrong since it's just two nouns thrown together. Maybe it's a little late to be changing it but I would have use Næturmáni, which means Night's Moon / Moon of the night. Other than that and some oddly worded sentences I'm enjoying this story so far.
image is broken
workiing link to same image
https://derpibooru.org/1486556
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Fixed.
I like this picture of poniefied Loki. Its a good one