Crossover with marvel universe, mainly the Thor Mythos. Loki stands trial for his crimes and is banished from Asgard to a place where he can learn the true value of loyalty and mercy with his granddaughters, Celestia and Luna princesses of Equestria.
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(1) is it a tiara (which is a type of diadem used to maintain the hair on top of the head so it doesn't go everywhere) or a crown (which is mainly used as a symbol for the kings and queens). Judging by the fact that Celestia is a monarch what she is wearing is a crown.
(2) a necklace is only used for decoration (and to show people how much money are you willing to spend is useless trivialities) while a breastplate is used to stop arrows from skewering you I highly doubt anyone in the MLP series (except the guards) use breastplates.
(3) it's kinda stupid to only use one (singular) horseshoe. It would be like going to jog while only using one shoe.
(1) so. . . are Celeatia and Luna inanimate objects? Because when you use the word "these" you normally refer to objects or to people in a demeaning way. I think you meant to type the word they instead of these
(2) interesting, so who is ruling Canterlot now? Because since both Celestia and Luna were the rulers (which means that they are not the rulers anymore) means that the Equestrians need a new ruler(s). So, who is/are the new ruler(s)
(3) not true. Yes, both rule Canterlot. But Mi Amore Candenza and Shining Armor rule the Crystal Empire, Twilight Sparkle rules over Ponyville. And what of Ember, ruler of the Dragonlands and the Yak King (who's son almost called for war against the Equestrians) I believe you are missing a lot of history of the planet.
(4) if you remove the word magnificent from that part of the sentence, it would say "the ruling princesses of this magic land called Equestria" I think you meant magical
(1) this is a runon sentence. Sure, it was comas, but it doesn't have a single period.
(1) this means that, even though the Equestrians in Canterlot are ruled by a diarchy (which means both are equally powerful), the subject has befriended Luna.
(2) in other words, out of all the population that belongs to the Equestrians, only one individual has become a friend to Luna? Damn, that's both sad and pathetic.
(1) I am so much better at hinding. Once I hind, no one can find me from my hinding place. The reason? I am an expert at hinding very hindingly while playing hind and seek. Get it? I am making fun of you from the fact that you thought the word hind and hide are the same thing.
(2) I am a very arrogant individual, I won't deny that. But I am not uncaring. If Celestia was arrogant (which she never was to begin with) she would've stated "my time is more important than yours" or "my day will always be more loved than your night" because she's exaggerating her own importance (in other words p, being arrogant)
(3) made ignore the signs huh? I believe you meant to write, made her ignore.
(4) if anything would've exploded in her face, she wouldn't have a face to begin with. And since emotions don't literally explode (just like you've stated) then she would've been dead (which is impossible because emotions don't explode).
(1) you do know that what you just said means that both Luna and Celestia aren't actually sisters right! I mean, if my step-sister and I saw our mothers die (note, mothers means plural, in other words more than one) means that we are at best only half related. You describe at the beginning both Luna and Celestia as sisters instead of step-sisters. And what race were their step-siblings? Because according to Mendelian genetics (primitive genetics) there would be a minimum percentage of 25% chance for their step siblings for being pure alicorns, 50% chance for being highbreeds (mixture of any of the two races or more) and a 25% for being anything but an alicorn. But, in modern genetics, as long as one member has alicorn DNA there would've been a very high chance for the offspring being either alicorns (alicorn DNA would've been dominant) or any other race with characteristics of another race.
(2) you do know that the King was defeated by the solar princesses, right? I mean, casting that umbra pony King into the deepest bowels of the ice is a defeat in almost any book. But it seems that you have another definition for "victory"
(3) Discord was defeated by both of them remember? They used the Elements of Harmony to petrify him. Again, another case scenario in which they won.
(4) that means that their powers either corrupt, twist or mutate everything their magic does contact with. . . right? I mean, that's the definition of "unnatural" similar to the Corruption in darksiders 2. Everything the Corruption does contact with in that game, it twists it and transforms it into an abomination that will only seek to destroy or devour everything untouched of the Corruption.
(5) again, wrong. Luna was casted to the moon for a thousand years, while there, she had only herself and Nightmare Moon as company. While Celestia still had all of her subjects who loved and worshiped her with their last breath.
(1) which means that when Luna was casted to the moon by the Elements of Harmony, their father would've visited Celestia at least 2 times. Which only supports my point that Celestia wasn't alone for her father had visited her twice.
(1) good to know that Loki isn't part of Luna's direct family then
You desperately need a co-author that would've easily spotted all of these problems.
So I started to read this story and.....
This made me laugh
Harmony and balance are separate things, especially if it has to do with Equestria
Lunas pic is dead
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Works for me
I think the use of the words unnatural powers means that sombra and discord had augmented there power artificially and thus were not at there natural power levels.