Crossover with marvel universe, mainly the Thor Mythos. Loki stands trial for his crimes and is banished from Asgard to a place where he can learn the true value of loyalty and mercy with his granddaughters, Celestia and Luna princesses of Equestria.
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resistance
much to think
that should go more like
“Thank you, sister., Good night. See you at breakfast.” said Luna as she started the walk to her chambers. Night court might have been cancelled for the next few days, but she still had the duty of watching over the dreams of their little ponies.
I would like to formally extend my offer of services as a proofreader. If you have one, he/she isn't very good. PM me.
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I don't have a proofreader at the moment, I'm actually waiting the answer of few possible proofreaders.
May I contact you later?
8096073 Certainly. I mean no offence, it's just that (having seen a forum post a while back on what makes a good story) the vast majority of those on the site that i know of consider good grammar to be an essential part of it. While i can look past that, if necessary, this story has en masse potentiale, if i may say so. I'd hate to see it go without the acclaim it might deserve in the future because of some grammatical errors.
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None taken, english isn't my native language and this is my first history.
I appreciate the advice and constructive criticism.
Thank you.
8096111 no problem.
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
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It will be very late in the story and it might involve certains Thor's stories like the 'War of Realms' or the 'God-Butcher' but for now it's more world-building.
Don't worry I will put a note at the top before the chapter starts.
Given the Authors Note, would his catting around be partly responsible for the old wives tales of Changelings for some storys? "I am an ordinary mortal! How could I have a child with magic, minor though it is..."
I think you're forgetting a get in there.
Also shouldn't it be let's?
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Yeah, sorry about that. This story was my first fic and I wrote about five chapters before posting one after the other, there are a lot of mistakes that make me cringe today. I'm better at writing but some mistakes do crop up since English isn't my first language nor is it the one I use on my day to day aside from when I'm on the Internet.