I want a chapter where Twilight decides to 'repay' Shining for helping her with her wings by reversing their roles (i.e., gender-bending). Or, is that outside your comfort zone, AP?

2157403 That is so outside of my comfort zone.

2156306 Request granted.

Well... That was hot.

Dat liquid pride.

Commence read.

Alright then.

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Add a changeling to the mix...

Meh... think I will read the whole thing through again. It's one worthy of re-reading

Just read that in one sitting.

The progression of intensity was definitely there. Unfortunately, the writing quality in 4 5 and 6 was... lower than the first three. The repetitive usage of phrases gave it a manufactured quality, that demoted it from your unique approach to... standard-fare incest. I didn't get any of the characterization that was present earlier. To be honest, it was underwhelming. I mean, good on you for updating with Twilicorn, but... this chapter definitely felt tacked-on. Sorry...

However, your descriptions were excellent. You got the technical aspects of the writing all great. I will definitely be looking at your other work (and did I see you mention an AppleMac story in the comments somewhere?).

Well... I honestly enjoy it more when there's a build up and release. The last 2 chapters didn't add anything, just mindless clop; which is fine I suppose but not as enjoyable (to me, personal opinion, ymmv) as the first 4 chapters.

I was TOTALLY waiting for you to add one for Alicorn Twilight. Lo and behold, you did so! Awesome!

Excellent, although I still have my sole objection:
Performing a certain act in here seems to defy physics... Unless Twilight's horn in fact *did* repeatedly stab Shining in the upper pelvis area.
I just... Can't get over that :|
Great read nevertheless! I can't speak for anyone else, but I at least eagerly await your next installment (of anything :O)

This fic went from good to what to yup that just happened.

anyway good fic look forward to more.

‘liquid pride’

Killed it!

Update?

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I have to agree on this chapter. Twilight's dialogue seems out of character for her.

Anon, you are SO my go-to brony for pure unadulterated fun clop.

i knew this would happen! and i love it! XD
next time princess orgy!
Shining is offically the luckyest stallion in eqestria! :D

until I’m a quivering pile of unicorn flesh drooling your spunk from my well-fucked cunt.

Isnt she an alicorn now?

2160917 Yes, but that's in dialogue. It's hinting at the fact that she's not quite adjusted to her new species yet.

Generally speaking, mistakes that are evident in dialogue are usually quite deliberate.

You've REALLY gotta stop marking this as "Complete" after each chapter. You gotta turn it into an enormous story! It's the best clop, so I would love you forever if you did!

2161208 I never know if I'm gonna write another chapter.

2161213 Well this was fantastic. I loved the finale, with Twilight being my favorite character, so I'm happy you didn't ignore her being an alicorn. Though, are you going to tag the story as having Twilight AND Twilicorn?

Whew still my favorite clopfic and in my opinion the best I've read. Awesome job

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You have a comfort zone...?

AWWWW YEAH! GOOD FUCKING SHOW! WELL DONE SIR! Especially with that little joke in there. "Liquid Pride" isn't just tears anymore.

I won't write if the story is good or not, let the facts that I liked and faved it speak for themselves.

What I'd like to do however is to summarize what we have to far:
cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt cunt
spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk spunk

There are so many other words that can be used. ;_;

....yum liquid pride

Well, I can honestly say that was alright...

I'm going to hell for sure...

Glad to see that I wasn't the only one to think dirty thoughts when Shining said "Liquid Pride" in the episode.

Hey, I love Shining x Twilight as much as the next person, but this story started out as... A story. Now it's just turning into mindless clop...

HOT!

I came buckets

No but seriously, a great clopfic right here. 5/5, would bang.

You know? I was honestly looking forward to some kind of emotional drama, you do it really well. I even skipped to the end because I wanted to get that part, I skipped clop man!

As a clop fic, it is one of the better ones.

This was a bonus chapter written after the finale, wasn't it? It sure feels like it.

Pretty humorous. Couldn't quite get excited over it like the last ones, vulgarity is sort of a turn off for me. Or maybe it's more enticing for me when one or more of the characters is still not 100% comfortable with the idea. Also wish Cadance would have been there with them as well. Anywho

Very enjoyable read, glad I read this story. Thanks for putting it out there for us!

"Counseling not included."?....

'liquid pride'

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They're not biologically related, so it's not weird at all!

2157417 DO IT! XD

(Not if you don't want to, but it would be awesome.)

Love the story.

Sweet Celestia, this story is so fucking HOT!!!!

Oh, I needed counseling far before I read this story.

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Yeah, I was actually somewhat expecting to read at the end that Twilight had actually been Cadance the entire time. And now, because Twilight had wings, Cadance could fool Shining for an entire session without him realizing it.
Oh well. It is what it is.

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i really want to know why this incest pair is so popular?
i loathe this pair so much.

You should add a bonus chapter where Twilight got pregnant, and the press tries to figure out who the dad is. Sorry, I have a pregnancy fetish.