B: I fucking excited for this story. I am so pumped for chapter 3! This story just has such saucy scenes and such fun twists. Expected? Maybe, but that doesn't mean they're not great!
1235023>>1235031 Tazer me! I think I'm losing the use of my limbs! At this rate I don't think I can kdsflfjopwieaivoasldvk;alknv;lnoawirnv..................
I... actually like this. Very well written and believable. Just, if you DO end up with a Shining/Twilight sex scene, make the emotions real. Something like them doing it once, just to relieve the tension and get back to normal would be perfect, I think.
1235199 Prorated Depravity will have Twilight going 'OMG I don't believe this shit ' And then she's all 'He's attracted to me?!' and the like. And then it's eventually a case of her imagining what Shining would want to happen. And she gets turned on by her mental images
And then, in Iniquitous Depravity, they'll fuck. Well, after foreplay of course. It might end up being a tacit agreement between the two that they have a few one-night-stands down the road. I've not decided how to end it yet.
>>go to Canterlot for a picnic with my brother >>wait an hour, nobody's there >>get irritated >>go to his house, nobody's there >>go see Cadence >>there's my brother >>he's on top of Cadence >>with his dick inside her >>feel incredibly embarassed >>she's painted purple... actually, she looks a lot like me >>my brother cums shouting my name >>what the fuck just happened >>he gets up >>gets on the floor >>everypony walk the dinosaur
Yeah, that went well. I bet Shinning Armour is cursing Pavlov right about now, "It's not my fault! It was Cadance's idea!"
I'm honestly really curious as to where this is going now. Not looking for any more sex, Shinning with Cadence or otherwise, I just want to see where this runnawaytrain of fuckedupness is going to go.
And to think, I just checked this one a whime and lo and behold it'd updated today.
I have an odd kind of viewpoint when it comes to incest. On the logical side of me, I see no reason to make it this horribly taboo thing. As long as you don't have babies with your own family members, why is it bad? You know, outside of the clear potential for HORRENDOUS drama and emotional destruction, but that's a potential issue for any relationship that goes sexual. Religion is the sole reason incest is viewed as such a bad thing, I believe.
But on the more emotional side of me, I go 'eew, that's like me saying it'd be fine to bang my brother!' Course, if I had a hot sister....
Heh, but seriously, it makes sense: incest, as we call it, is just us lusting after those that are closer to us than anyone else in our lives, unless we have a seriously bucked-up family life or something. What bond of love can we say is stronger than the bond between a Mother and child? Brother and sister? This is just my viewpoint personally however, and perhaps it's creepy to some because, well, society as we know it today. Step outside of that safe little box though, and look at it with your own two eyes; you remove society's reason, namely, 'it's just wrong', and you really have no reason outside of religion going 'because God said so'.
Even then, I find it amusing that both of those reasons are basically 'it just is wrong, okay?!'
This has got to be the most crazy piece of clop I've ever seen. But in the best possible way, really. I am curious, did you ever take a psychology class in school?
This has got to be the most crazy piece of clop I've ever seen. But in the best possible way, really. I am curious, did you ever take a psychology class in school?
I was expecting something alot worse (sitation wise) good work and wish you luck on further chapters! GOOD STORTY! (ironicly i use twilight smile alot...now i wanna say i use candence alot just becuse of this story!)
1235349 She's excited about reading an incest fic starring two of the most important Ponies in her life pretending to use her for sex (Though in two different ways),
This has potential to be a really really good drama. But if it ends with (or involves) Twilight having sex with Shining Armor then I will be severely disappoint. EDIT: *reads earlier comments* FUCK. Well, looks like I won't be tracking this story. Sad too, it had quite a bit of potential.
1238714 I kind of suspected it wouldn't end well when I noticed that it only had the [Romance] tag and nothing else. Oh well, plenty more fanfics on the site.
1238685 Then you're going to be severely disappointed because, to quote Anonymous:
Prorated Depravity will have Twilight going 'OMG I don't believe this shit ' And then she's all 'He's attracted to me?!' and the like. And then it's eventually a case of her imagining what Shining would want to happen. And she gets turned on by her mental images And then, in Iniquitous Depravity, they'll fuck. Well, after foreplay of course. It might end up being a tacit agreement between the two that they have a few one-night-stands down the road. I've not decided how to end it yet.
There were cases of entire societies living up to that view point, for over tens of generations. Except they had children as a result. The result... horribly mangled gene pools, resultant offspring riddled with genetic disorders that seem to come straight out of a macabre novel. Some would even have their genetalia mixed together and nonfunctional, doomed to never properly enjoy what that society wanted in the first place, for example
Search for "Inbreeding depression" and "Hybrid vigor" in Wikipedia for more details.
When the aversion we naturally feel against that kind of risk becomes a taboo by the society, the risk or aversion may be ignored or even get forgotten, because every one of us wants to take or do something that is forbidden to everyone. That's precisely why incest is a fetish.
Yes, there are always more graphical reasons than "it is wrong because it's wrong" when it comes to biology.
A: Twilight is really good at running away.
B: I fucking excited for this story. I am so pumped for chapter 3!
This story just has such saucy scenes and such fun twists. Expected? Maybe, but that doesn't mean they're not great!
1234739
She read a book about it.
or maybe just teleportation dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Twilight_Sparkle_lolface.png
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Am so gonna read it! Now I seen your work for a while, would you consider in writing horror fics sometime? am a big fan of those
ಠ_ಠ
You've gotten really fucking good at writing deliciously raunchy scenes. It was so detailed, gooey and primal!
1234925 Five years of practice, actually. I usually tone it down a little bit for teh pony prons. No toning this story down though!
1234811 cool gif
I thought she'd freak out a bit more.
Ahhh! Someone please help me I think I've lost the ability to blink!
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Does anyone have a tazer, i need to come out of shock...
On second thoughts DA FAQ DID I JUST READ!!??!!
1015077
You sir.
You win for Firefly gif.
Fuckin' saved.
1235023 You sure you don't need a tazer cuss I carry one around with me.
Oh and what you just read is a fic about kinky role-play and possible incest.
Oh GOD. What did I just read?
I'm never coming back here! /lying because curiosity always wins out
1235023>>1235031
Tazer me! I think I'm losing the use of my limbs! At this rate I don't think I can kdsflfjopwieaivoasldvk;alknv;lnoawirnv..................
1235060 Forget the tazer! Difib set up CLEAR!
Nurse Redheart: We're loosing him!
Me:No! I will not let a fellow broni fall CLEAR!
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927341 according to the bible, we are all products of incest. wait wut? this is why i'm an athiest
1235096
......sdlafjkoqiwuer,vnasiefdf! Gah! (pant) (pant) What in the bloody hell just happened? Armageddon? It sure felt like it.
1235154 Cadance is the alicorn of love. I'm assuming she'd get a kick out of granting fantasies like this.
I... actually like this. Very well written and believable. Just, if you DO end up with a Shining/Twilight sex scene, make the emotions real. Something like them doing it once, just to relieve the tension and get back to normal would be perfect, I think.
1235199 Prorated Depravity will have Twilight going 'OMG I don't believe this shit ' And then she's all 'He's attracted to me?!' and the like. And then it's eventually a case of her imagining what Shining would want to happen. And she gets turned on by her mental images
And then, in Iniquitous Depravity, they'll fuck. Well, after foreplay of course. It might end up being a tacit agreement between the two that they have a few one-night-stands down the road. I've not decided how to end it yet.
Oh god this is priceless. When Twilight said "you called her Twilie", I just lost it
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I approve. I just like the characters too much to believe them being straight up perverts. Just kill the tension and move on is my vote.
But to be honest, I'm just happy to have some actual straight clop!
See this has updated
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So psyched for the rest of this
I expect the next chapter on my desk by tommorow's noon!
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and that ending i wasn't expecting. kinda glad you didn't end with them rutting
>>go to Canterlot for a picnic with my brother
>>wait an hour, nobody's there
>>get irritated
>>go to his house, nobody's there
>>go see Cadence
>>there's my brother
>>he's on top of Cadence
>>with his dick inside her
>>feel incredibly embarassed
>>she's painted purple... actually, she looks a lot like me
>>my brother cums shouting my name
>>what the fuck just happened
>>he gets up
>>gets on the floor
>>everypony walk the dinosaur
BBBFF~!!!!! Yaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii~!!!!
A bit shorter than I would have preferred, but still delightfully amusing and awkward.
Well it seems Shining and Cadence have a lot to do to get Twilight's trust back.
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Bring on the next chapter!
...BWAH-HAHAHAHA!
Yeah, that went well. I bet Shinning Armour is cursing Pavlov right about now, "It's not my fault! It was Cadance's idea!"
I'm honestly really curious as to where this is going now. Not looking for any more sex, Shinning with Cadence or otherwise, I just want to see where this runnawaytrain of fuckedupness is going to go.
And to think, I just checked this one a whime and lo and behold it'd updated today.
Oh, this is going to be AMAZING.
I have an odd kind of viewpoint when it comes to incest. On the logical side of me, I see no reason to make it this horribly taboo thing. As long as you don't have babies with your own family members, why is it bad? You know, outside of the clear potential for HORRENDOUS drama and emotional destruction, but that's a potential issue for any relationship that goes sexual. Religion is the sole reason incest is viewed as such a bad thing, I believe.
But on the more emotional side of me, I go 'eew, that's like me saying it'd be fine to bang my brother!' Course, if I had a hot sister....
Heh, but seriously, it makes sense: incest, as we call it, is just us lusting after those that are closer to us than anyone else in our lives, unless we have a seriously bucked-up family life or something. What bond of love can we say is stronger than the bond between a Mother and child? Brother and sister? This is just my viewpoint personally however, and perhaps it's creepy to some because, well, society as we know it today. Step outside of that safe little box though, and look at it with your own two eyes; you remove society's reason, namely, 'it's just wrong', and you really have no reason outside of religion going 'because God said so'.
Even then, I find it amusing that both of those reasons are basically 'it just is wrong, okay?!'
....
I've seen worse than this.
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Sorry, I could not resist.
This has got to be the most crazy piece of clop I've ever seen. But in the best possible way, really.
I am curious, did you ever take a psychology class in school?
This has got to be the most crazy piece of clop I've ever seen. But in the best possible way, really.
I am curious, did you ever take a psychology class in school?
I was expecting something alot worse (sitation wise) good work and wish you luck on further chapters! GOOD STORTY! (ironicly i use twilight smile alot...now i wanna say i use candence alot just becuse of this story!)
good straight clop like this is hard to find
I was honestly expecting it all to be in one large chapter, but this is better I think. Anyway, looking forward to the rest.
...ok then.
1235349
She's excited about reading an incest fic starring two of the most important Ponies in her life pretending to use her for sex (Though in two different ways),
yes, lets not even try to asses and understand the situation, but run a constant marathon every time something is too much for you. Beeeeeeitch
This has potential to be a really really good drama. But if it ends with (or involves) Twilight having sex with Shining Armor then I will be severely disappoint.
EDIT: *reads earlier comments* FUCK. Well, looks like I won't be tracking this story. Sad too, it had quite a bit of potential.
1238685 I'm sorry, you were expecting something else from a story with 'Depravity' in the title?
1238714
I kind of suspected it wouldn't end well when I noticed that it only had the [Romance] tag and nothing else. Oh well, plenty more fanfics on the site.
1238685 Then you're going to be severely disappointed because, to quote Anonymous:
Ahhhhh!
Need moar! >.> <.< but no one must ever know I read this....
puu.sh/12axg
*runs away*
1236703
There were cases of entire societies living up to that view point, for over tens of generations. Except they had children as a result.
The result... horribly mangled gene pools, resultant offspring riddled with genetic disorders that seem to come straight out of a macabre novel. Some would even have their genetalia mixed together and nonfunctional, doomed to never properly enjoy what that society wanted in the first place, for example
Search for "Inbreeding depression" and "Hybrid vigor" in Wikipedia for more details.
When the aversion we naturally feel against that kind of risk becomes a taboo by the society, the risk or aversion may be ignored or even get forgotten, because every one of us wants to take or do something that is forbidden to everyone. That's precisely why incest is a fetish.
Yes, there are always more graphical reasons than "it is wrong because it's wrong" when it comes to biology.