You know, I'm really disappointed about the path the story took. I really was hoping for a good ArmorCadence story with some cosplay and some other kinky things, but I just wish it didn't go down the TwiArmor path. When I first read it as a one shot, I kind of shrugged it off and thought, "Eh, it's some cosplay, nothing wrong with that". Then it becomes a multiple chapter story and it seems to go down for me.
Now don't get me wrong, the writing is good and the clop is nice, but it should've just stayed an ArmorCadence story instead IMO. I don't know what it is, but TwiArmor stories just make me feel a little uneasy. Sorry mate, you had a good story here, but the path it went down really made it sour for me.
1259174 It aint everyone's cup o' tea, fer sure. I should note I haven't written an incest story in the 6 years or so I've been writing. This is the very first one. I'll mebbe write some proper shining/cadance at a later date.
1259180 It's not bad for one you haven't written in six years, but this just wasn't that good of a story to me. It's amazing that I love CeleLuna and some other sibling pairings, but this incest pairing for some reason really makes me feel uneasy. It's not God awful, I just didn't like where the story went.
1259216 That's interesting. For me it's TwiSpike, for some reason. Maybe it's the combination of incest and that he's so young in the show. Though authors may or may not age young characters in fimfictions to give them romances. Even though it isn't LITERALLY, incest, for some reason it bothers me more than other taboo pairs. I haven't read an entire TwiSpike fic, clop or not, actually. I see the TwiSpike label/tag and I just...can't...
Gonna have to agree here. It almost acts like it wants to explore the consequences of incest and the personal implications involved, but then it turns out to be mere clop and nothing bad happens. Oh well, at least it's well-written. But that just makes it more disappointing. Not a bad story, though, I guess I'm a fool for expecting anything more from clop than clop. Not everything is Romance Reports.
Personally, I was hoping for a threesome to seal the deal, but hey, this is good too. I liked it. Would have liked more of an aftermath with Twi and Armor, maybe have the two talk it out, but hey, still good.
1259362 Ironic since I believe Spike gets ALL the mares. Though, I can see what some say about him being possibly too young. Though I do wish we knew how old he was. My guess is that he's in his teens most likely. 1259627 Glad to see I'm not the only one who didn't like where this story went. Though, I do have to say that I was never a fan of Romance Reports, sorry, I couldn't get into that story.
Not everyone's cup of tea. Only reason I find it good is because it keeps its characters surprisingly in-character, and their reactions to certain events are pretty realistic. Other than that, it's pretty generic clop shit.
I'm not really into clop. I prefer the romantic stuff.
This though? I was loving every minute of it. The whole thing was just so naughty. Twilight x Shining Armor is something that I've considered writing about (not clop though), and I think you handled it well here. not exactly how I think it'd go, but well nonetheless.
I was a little disappointed that Cadence interfered. I was really looking forward to the awkward scene where they... you know, decide to do it. I was promised Twilight seducing Shining Armor!
Also, the clop scenes seemed to drag on a tiny bit for me. I'm just being picky though.
Does anypony actually clop while reading... well, clop?
one part of me wants to kill myself for the moral implications another part of me wants to screw it and go lesbein rampage....another part of me wants to go "fuck it" am gonna fuck'em all!...and as a whole we all agree this...THAT WAS SURPRISINGLY MASSIVLY A TURN ON! (my 3 reactions) Bravo on this work good man i am surprised and am happy that even though the moral implications are bad that ill ignore fiverisly thank you for your hard work and keep it up...and am saying this about clop...gee my pride in being equel is truly somthing thank you once more for thsi work my morals are dead now...arnt they... jerk...you made me have 3 deffrent reactions...wait didnt do this already? (GJ and many more creepy pinkiepies smiles for you!)
Gawd dayum. I never thought i'd see the day when i said this but, too much clop! Seriously, most clopfics have like a 4000 word setup, and then maybe, just maybe, a 1000 word sex scene. I prefer ones that have 2000ish. But this? This was at least 4000 words of just dirty hawt sexxins.
Agreed that another chapter with all three would be quite appreciated, old bean!
If only to help Twi and Shining realize they didn't just commit adultery. Poor Shining would probably go all to pieces once the drugs and spells wore off.
Glorious incest!
Bravo. You did a wonderful job on a perverted subject.
You know, I'm really disappointed about the path the story took. I really was hoping for a good ArmorCadence story with some cosplay and some other kinky things, but I just wish it didn't go down the TwiArmor path. When I first read it as a one shot, I kind of shrugged it off and thought, "Eh, it's some cosplay, nothing wrong with that". Then it becomes a multiple chapter story and it seems to go down for me.
Now don't get me wrong, the writing is good and the clop is nice, but it should've just stayed an ArmorCadence story instead IMO. I don't know what it is, but TwiArmor stories just make me feel a little uneasy. Sorry mate, you had a good story here, but the path it went down really made it sour for me.
1259174 It aint everyone's cup o' tea, fer sure. I should note I haven't written an incest story in the 6 years or so I've been writing. This is the very first one. I'll mebbe write some proper shining/cadance at a later date.
I haven't read this yet, and my brain is already melting out the sides of my ears. So MUCH PAIN!
Haha, that description is so fuckin' funny!
*Get's to Shinning explaining that basket was made by Cadence*
Alright. 5 bucks says the food is spiked.
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When I saw that this story got updated...
Jeeze, Cadence, you're so... Naughty.
1259180 It's not bad for one you haven't written in six years, but this just wasn't that good of a story to me. It's amazing that I love CeleLuna and some other sibling pairings, but this incest pairing for some reason really makes me feel uneasy. It's not God awful, I just didn't like where the story went.
*Finishes*
Called it.
Naughty naughty Cadence
Cadance, you are one twisted pony.
Now we need the bonus chapter of all three of them together.
1259226 ARE YOU BLIND?!
The one time I actually mean it when I say 'gimme half an hour' and it's posted right there...and you didn't even check? tsk tsk.
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My bad, I had just finished reading the third chapter and then you had updated :P
1259229 you sir have read my mind. Pegasus make it so, your fans demand it!
When I heard Cadence made the food I was saying "There's something in the food there has to be"
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first
also i just cant believe cadence i knew this would happen but still I'm just shocked
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That's interesting. For me it's TwiSpike, for some reason. Maybe it's the combination of incest and that he's so young in the show. Though authors may or may not age young characters in fimfictions to give them romances. Even though it isn't LITERALLY, incest, for some reason it bothers me more than other taboo pairs.
I haven't read an entire TwiSpike fic, clop or not, actually. I see the TwiSpike label/tag and I just...can't...
Ah Cadence, such a clever cupid you are.
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ENCORE ENCORE
Called it...
Worst of all, there are images about...
Just for the sake of warning, the image I am about to post is
NSFW....
But then again, this story is NSFW, so what the hell?
Don't say I didn't warn you!
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Cadence must be really into open marriages.
And now, the threesome
Ah inbreeding. Nothing can possibly go wro-
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GET OUT OF HERE CHARLES II!
It's hard to write comments on this keyboard when my hands are so dirty.
I love how you make the scene loooonnnngggg. Makes it all better!
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Gonna have to agree here. It almost acts like it wants to explore the consequences of incest and the personal implications involved, but then it turns out to be mere clop and nothing bad happens. Oh well, at least it's well-written. But that just makes it more disappointing. Not a bad story, though, I guess I'm a fool for expecting anything more from clop than clop. Not everything is Romance Reports.
Personally, I was hoping for a threesome to seal the deal, but hey, this is good too. I liked it. Would have liked more of an aftermath with Twi and Armor, maybe have the two talk it out, but hey, still good.
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I was hoping for a threesome as well.
What do you say, author? Are you up for writing another chapter?
Or maybe a whole sequel...
That was deadly.
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1259362 Ironic since I believe Spike gets ALL the mares. Though, I can see what some say about him being possibly too young. Though I do wish we knew how old he was. My guess is that he's in his teens most likely.
1259627 Glad to see I'm not the only one who didn't like where this story went. Though, I do have to say that I was never a fan of Romance Reports, sorry, I couldn't get into that story.
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Not everyone's cup of tea. Only reason I find it good is because it keeps its characters surprisingly in-character, and their reactions to certain events are pretty realistic. Other than that, it's pretty generic clop shit.
I'm not really into clop. I prefer the romantic stuff.
This though? I was loving every minute of it. The whole thing was just so naughty. Twilight x Shining Armor is something that I've considered writing about (not clop though), and I think you handled it well here. not exactly how I think it'd go, but well nonetheless.
I was a little disappointed that Cadence interfered. I was really looking forward to the awkward scene where they... you know, decide to do it. I was promised Twilight seducing Shining Armor!
Also, the clop scenes seemed to drag on a tiny bit for me. I'm just being picky though.
Does anypony actually clop while reading... well, clop?
And with that chapter we got more Twishine incest than BigAJ incest. Congrats Twi!
That Cadence is really kinky.
And that chap clop was hawt.
WOW! that was........was.........well I dunno what the hell that was but it certainly was dirty, sick, and just plain wrong
I like it! WTF is wrong with me?!
I like how Cadence was the dirtiest bitch of all! This was hilarious!
I feel dirty for liking this O.o
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Master Zero, The conversation probably would have went something to the effect of "Never speak of this......ever" followed by "Same time next week"?
... Well played. Very well played. And I would be interested in seeing a bonus scene with Cadence joining them.
I don't know who is the more sick.
The two siblings for fucking, or Cadence for arangeing it.
What the hell. ALL THESE PONIES ARE CRAZY
Mwahahaa. Oh, the places this story can go from here.... Lookin' forward to it. *evil predatory grin!*
one part of me wants to kill myself for the moral implications another part of me wants to screw it and go lesbein rampage....another part of me wants to go "fuck it" am gonna fuck'em all!...and as a whole we all agree this...THAT WAS SURPRISINGLY MASSIVLY A TURN ON! (my 3 reactions)
Bravo on this work good man i am surprised and am happy that even though the moral implications are bad that ill ignore fiverisly thank you for your hard work and keep it up...and am saying this about clop...gee my pride in being equel is truly somthing
thank you once more for thsi work
my morals are dead now...arnt they...
jerk...you made me have 3 deffrent reactions...wait didnt do this already? (GJ and many more creepy pinkiepies smiles for you!)
threesome?! I hope so
Well written. Now I want a threesome
Gawd dayum. I never thought i'd see the day when i said this but, too much clop! Seriously, most clopfics have like a 4000 word setup, and then maybe, just maybe, a 1000 word sex scene. I prefer ones that have 2000ish. But this? This was at least 4000 words of just dirty hawt sexxins.
My body wasn't ready... Bravo sir.
Wow Candace has some real kinky fetishes.
1259521 Are we aloud to post stuff like that?!
P.S.asking out of curiosity and not flame
Agreed that another chapter with all three would be quite appreciated, old bean!
If only to help Twi and Shining realize they didn't just commit adultery. Poor Shining would probably go all to pieces once the drugs and spells wore off.
Ewww but fun.