When cards of unknown origin begun to appear across Equestria, incidents begun to arise related to their appearance. While most are harmless, a few of the cards ended up corrupting the personality of those who touched them, attempts to stop them proved to be fruitless as the corrupted ponies kept on saying they could only be stopped in a duel.
Princess Celestia, the ruler of Equestria, casted a spell on one of the cards in hopes looking into their purpose and find a solution in the process. The spell backfired and she ended up warping a scared pony with a backpack in front of her. Much to her surprise, the pony claims himself to be a being known as a human named Dusk from a world known as Earth.
Celestia was more surprised when Dusk showed her the contents of his backpack; containing a unknown object and multiple deck of cards with the back design being the same as the ones that appeared in Equestria. He explained that he plays a popular card game known as Duel Monsters and he was packing his Duel Disk and his cards for a tournament prior to being warped.
Celestia realize she may have unexpectedly brought forth the solution she was seeking...
(An alternative universe Yu-Gi-Oh/MLP story)
this is great hope you update more!
This is great keep it up hope to see more duels soon
Quick question: which Duel Disk is Dusk using?
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Sorry Golden Flare. I should have added more details about Dusk's Duel Disk. It is almost identical to the one Yusei from 5D's used except it is light grey with dark blue outlines
Though ur writing could use some work in terms of sentence structure and a few semingly missing word or words in the wrong tense, from a story standpoint, not bad. I would assume ur fairly new to writing, so I would suggest u get an editor to assist u in the future
I'm not flaming or anything but I found one possible problem with the story one sentence after twilight said they would go get food dusk said can't agree with that even after the sentence claimed he agreed it's only a small error but confusing none the less. P.S keep up the good work
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I can't argue with that. My writing skills isn't the best and I'm trying to improve them as best I could. I'm happy though you stated that my story is alright despite such setbacks.
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Thanks for the heads-up. I took a look at that sentence and saw it was a mistake on my part. It was meant to be "I can't argue with that". The correction should be up by now.
8071531 Please update soon. Also, would you be interested in a oc? I have an idea for one that makes a deck, and then somehow convinces a evil number to change his ways and assist him. Though I haven't figured out how yet. Still, are you interested?
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I plan to make an update in a few days, so keep your eyes out. As for your OC, I would be interested in hearing what you have already. Please not that I would also need to check if your OC is suitable for the story or not.
8115688 Okay, when I offered an oc, I meant I offered to make one. I'm really good at it. Well, except for the history part. Still, if you want me to make an oc for your story, just tell me what details you would like to know.
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My apologies. I appreciate the offer, but I don't think I need an OC at the moment. However, I will be sure to message you the details if I would need one in the story at some point. That is if the offer is still open.
8115770 IT will be open when you need it. Can you still send me the details on what you would require to have so I can start working on some ocs for when you do need them?
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Unfortunately, I don't have any details for OCs at the moment. If I am able to think of something, then I will be sure to message you all the details. I am sorry for the inconvenience.
8115818 Okay, though I hope you at least update soon. Your story's concept of someone bringing Dual Monster to Equestria and teaching them how to play is something I really love.
8115818 I decided to look through my deck recently, and found out I have a number card. Want to know which one?
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Sure. It wouldn't hurt to know what you have.
8120631 Number 82. Can you please let me make an oc for your story? I just want to see my own deck in action in it. And maybe have the oc get in a relationship with Maud somewhere down the line.
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You can make an OC for my story at anytime. Feel free use any ideas that may come to your head. I am not picky with the details as long they are appropriate. I don't know the composition of your deck beside your Number card, I would appreciate such details.
8120685 I still need a list of what details you would need before I can make an oc in the first place. Also, is the maximum number of cards allowed 40 or 80? Because I really don't feel like typing all 80 cards in my deck.
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From what I can think off, the OC is that he is a pony who is very interested in the Duel Monsters cards that first appeared in Equestria. Learning that Dusk, the only expert in the game is currently in Ponyville, the OC would then travel there in hopes of learning about the game and possibly becoming Dusk's student. Ultimately, he would be friends with Dusk and the Mane 6; helping them against villians and evil Numbers.
I can't think much regarding his personality, but the OC would nevertheless be a good pony at heart. Apperance-wise, you are free to use anything that comes to mind. The OC's deck would the one you have and based on Number 82, I would deem it as a good Number. If this isn't enough, then I would try to give more information by tomorrow.
As for your deck, the rules is that a deck must have a minimal of 40 cards and a maximum of 60 cards. You can just type the names of your cards as long they are grouped from monsters, spells and traps. I can just look up the name of the cards and their properties on the internet.
8120763 Name: Half Coin
Pony type: Pegasus
Personality: Very understanding, quiet, cool-headed, and very, very, compassionate.
Cutie mark: a coin that has been split in half through the side, letting both sides be seen.
Mane color: Light Gray
Coat color: Silver
Eye color: Light blur
Talent: He is great at stopping arguments and healing mental wounds. He also can figure out what a pony is feeling, even somepony like Maud.
Fears: Mental wounds causing others to kill themselves because he failed to heal said wounds.
Well? What do you think? If you like him, I'll send his deck next.
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Your OC would be good addition for my story. From what I can tell, he seems to be a psychiatrist, who could help those previously possessed by evil Numbers. Is the cutie mark, the split coin meant to represent the two halves of one's mind?
Either way I like your OC, so you can send me details about your deck. Like I noted, the Main Deck must have 40-60 cards in total. You said that your deck have about 80 cards, so pick the ones you want to appear in my story.
Be sure to also include details about your Extra Deck if possible, which can have up to 15 cards. It consist of Fusion, Synchro, Xyz and certain Pendulum monsters.
8120853 His cutie mark represent more than just that. It represents the good and the bad in everything and showing that they are both needed.
Besides Number 82, these are the cards for his deck.
Traps:
Miracle's Wake
Zero Gravity
Jar of Greed
Draining Shield
Raigeki Break
Dust Tornado
Sakuretsu Armor
Waboku
Magic Cylinder
Shadow Spell
Shattered Axe
A Hero Emerges
Spells:
Dark Factory of Mass Production
Black Pendant X2
Hammer Shot
Spellbook Organization
Chorus of Sanctuary
Scapegoat
Mystical Space Typhoon
Double Summon
Fissure
Rush Recklessly
Convulsion of Nature
Monsters:
Kabazauls
7 Colored Fish
Whiptail Crow
Master Kyonshee
Woodborg Inpachi
Neo the Magic Swordsman
Battle Footballer
Labyrinth Wall
La Jinn the Mystical Genie of the Lamp
Dark Blade
Giant Soldier of Stone
Alexandrite Dragon
Swift Scarecrow
Yomi Ship
Moai Interceptor Cannons
Drillroid
InterPlanetaryPurplyThorny Dragon (Try saying that 10 times fast)
Magician of Faith
Slate Warrior
4-Starred Ladybug of Doom
Tribe-Infecting Virus
Skelengel
Gyroid
The Tricky
Man-Eater Bug
Graydle Eagle
Raging Flame Sprite
Hyper Hammerhead
Fencing Fire Ferret
Done. Man that was a lot to type. So? What do you think of it?
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Everything regarding your deck is fine. I will get to work in getting all the properties of each card.
I am not sure when it would be the right time for your OC to make his appearance, but he will be included in the story. My updates are irregular at best, so please be patient for you would see your deck in action at some point.
8120973 What about when you get to the episode Feeling Pinkie Keen? You could have the episode itself in the background half the time, and the other half of the time would be the episode itself.
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That shouldn't be a problem. I can work with that.
8121016 Well, there's only one question left to ask. And that is: Is the next chapter almost ready yet?
(On a side note, you should probably copy and paste the info on the oc and his deck somewhere so you don't forget it by the time he is suppose to appear)
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I am making progress and hopefully should have the next chapter upload by Thursday this week. As for the OC and deck, I already stored all the information in another document for safe keeping.
Which version of Yu-Gi-Oh is Dusk from? And why do you call him Dusk and Jake in the synopsis?
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Dusk isn't from any of the main Yu-Gi-Oh universes. He is from Earth, where Duel Monsters is merely just a popular card game and there are no heroics like found in the show. It however changed when he is now in Equestia.
As for the synopsis, it was a mistake on my part. It will be fixed in a few moments.
So will the cards only be ones that exist real world, or you will include a few anime only cards and a few original cards u came up with cards
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It will be a combination of all three. While it would primarily consist of real world cards, there will be some anime and original cards in the story.
8129484 How's the next chapter looking?
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Making progress, but personal life always get in the way as usual. Understand that I am not a full fledged writer and tend to write when I am in good mood. I may be slow for the next few days because I think I am starting to come down with something.
8131246 Is the next chapter at least half-way done?
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Pretty much and I hope to upload it in the next few days. That is if my sickness doesn't get worse.
nice work.
8131340 What's the verdict? Is the next chapter almost done? Also, do you think you can find a way to put my oc in earlier than the episode I suggested? I'm not sure I can wait that long.
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I was hampered by my sickness for the last few days, but I feel much better now. I plan to do to upload it tomorrow and regarding your OC, I could make him appear in episode 5; Griffon the Brush Off. What do you think?
8140735 Sure. Oh, make it so Gilda gets possessed near the end when she is just about to leave, and Dusk doesn't have his deck with him for some reason (You choose why) so Half Coin take his place and duels Gilda. What do you think of that?
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That will not be a problem. I was just thinking the same idea regarding Gilda and the following duel.
8141160 Cool! Also, well there be a dual in the next episode? Like, a practice one for Twilight?
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Not all the episodes will have a duel. While there will be a duel in the next episode, it will be in the second half and is currently being developed.
nice
Please try to get the next update ready quickly.
If Dusk was voiced, what would he sound like?
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I haven't thought of that.
I like this story. You don't have to take thisnseriously, but it would be cool if somepony used a ghostrick deck.
Dude great job!