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CrystalQueen


I'm just a Canadian transgirl who likes to play games

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Lance Higbee is just a typical card shop clerk who teaches kids how to play Duel Monsters. However, by night he also steals cards from the local corrupt police force under the guise of the Red Rocket, and then sells them at the shop with his two best friends. One night, during an otherwise normal run to the shop's "supplier", a portal unexpectedly transports him to the magical land of Equestria. Among all of this, supposedly dead Duelists begin to show up in Equestria and wreck havoc on the unprepared masses, for which Lance is the only answer they have to the threat.


Set during a non-descript time in the middle of Season 8 Pony side and 70 years after the end of 5D's Yugioh side, the in-universe card pool is roughly as big as the current TCG/OCG cardpool, and some plot relevant decks are mass produced in universe

Chapters (20)
Comments ( 25 )

I will read to see if I like it. Even if I don't I will still have it on Favorites.

“Obnoxiously complex” is an understatement.

As fellow yugioh fan, I appreciate the detail you put into modernizing all of these decks used by legendary duelist

As a reader, it's a great story, but the use of certain cards (aka pot of greed, graceful charity) doesn't have to be repeated, in my opinion it makes the paragraph of each card look weird. But this is just a minor nitpick on my end you don't have to change it.

As an duelist. If you'll permit me, I would love to play with you some times or even collab a story, yugioh/mlp crossovers are my favorite and I would love to make something amazing with you.

Comment posted by CrystalQueen deleted Oct 13th, 2018

I'm behind on my anime, but isn't Yugioh supposed to be about enslaving and ritually sacrificing innocent souls to create superpowered spells?

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And remember, if you lose you get send to the shadow realm.

The reason he lost was because he told him what his freaking set cards were.

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Yes, life is just really busy right now, so I don't really have the time to take on a third personal project in addition to my full time job and the other personal projects I'm working on

Damn your not using the English names but still good job

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:facehoof: You don't do that. If you ask me, that officer deserved to be fired, even though it was extreme.

Decided to start reading this fic.
It has a interesting premise(and the fact I love YGO stuff).

Though.. really hated how it start off with Luna losing badly in a duel and is show to be ultimately a failure..
It continues the issue in the show where if a royal sister gets involved, they get taken out and look like a huge failure.
It hurts alot more for Luna's case due to her track record looks worse(due to losing a 1000 years), like her returning from the moon only to fail and fail and FAIL again.

I wonder if Spike will get to duel too? Or is he sadly excluded..?
It was nice that Princess Luna gets to duel but its really disappointing she loses and such a huge failure here..
It just hurts..

So Luna wasn't losing to some villain but just Red?
Still it really hurts that Luna loses like that and pretty badly too. Especially since its her very first duel..
Even if Red wasn't a threat, Luna thought she was fighting one and still ultimately FAILS.

Sorry if I seem too negative..
I just feel like Luna got screwed..
Since the Mane 6 and Luna are important, will Spike be involved too or he is just excluded?

When the other girls saying they are unable to hold the cards(while Rarity just wanted to watch the duels), what about Spike? He has claws, fingers. He can clearly duel.

Honestly.. while it hurts that Luna lost her duel to Red, its even worse with how Twilight manages to beat him literally the next chapter.
It just makes Luna even more of a failure that while she loses, Twilght freaking wins. It felt like Luna got screwed to make Twilight look good(just like many times in the show..)

Really glad it looks like Spike will get to duel.
Though shouldn't he be using physical cards since he has fingers and thus able to hold the cards?

The duel was pretty nice.
Though I disliked the bit of Spike not understanding about card advantage when Graceful Charity was used, it makes him look like an idiot.
He's smarter than he looks. He has to since he's Twilight's number 1 assistant, having to understand stuff.

A pretty nice duel.

Though a missed oppertunity with Luna. Like when she is question about the 3 Upstart Goblins and Red saying he already told her that LP is meaningless and such. You could have had her tell him something afterwards like "This is why I was questioning that move. He could have finished you off but instead used those draw cards. It backfired on him by a misplay", showing she understands the game alot.

Well that's a pretty crazy duel.

Though didn't like the bit of even Luna was intimidated by Topologic Bomber Dragon.
Not only it makes her look weak(she's a freaking alicorn) but it doesn't make sense since she witnessed alot of messed up stuff in ponies' dreams such as dangerous monsters, she shouldn't be intimidated that easily.

I really REALLY hope Spike and Luna don't end up losing and being carded there..

So Discord and Twilight are able to beat Red on their very first duels ever but Luna can't?
I feel like this added salt to Luna's wounds there..

“Actually, I do believe you won’t have to worry about catching your breath.” The two mares heard a voice say as a human walked around a corner, a Duel Disk on his arm. “But before I defeat you, would either of you be so kind as to tell me where I can find a man by the name of ‘Red Rocket’? Or 6 mares by the names of Twilight Sparkle, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Fluttershy or Applejack?”

What about Spike?
So he isn't even acknowledged due to he's not a "chosen one" like those 7?


Also.. didn't expect Applejack and Fluttershy to lose like that.

Honestly I thought Spike would be using more than just relying on Horus there.
Like him using many powerful dragons and such.

Since half of the Mane 6 are now down, I really hope Spike and Luna don't get taken out..

Honstly this was a pretty good fanfic.
And the Red Eyes fusion was epic.

But..
I really didn't like how Spike and Luna got taken out off screen like fodder like that and the fact they've been card and humiliated badly by being used in the duel like puppets(with Luna being destroyed a bunch). And the fact neither of them had any clue on whats happening made the humiliation even worse..
And the fact Luna looks like even more of a huge failure due to being taken out like that..(and the fact she pretty much lost 2 freaking duels).
It also hurts that Spike didn't get to properly duel while the mane 6 did, what's worse his very first duel was just him being taken out off-screen like fodder..

Really sorry if my comments are really bothersome but.. I really want to let that off of my chest..

I hope my comments weren't too bothersome, were they..?

Sorry..
It just really bums me out on how Spike and Princess Luna were handled here..

I just wished something is done on how Spike and Luna were handled here..

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