Uh... I like writing pony stories... Is that a good enough bio?
Scootaloo has had enough of being bullied so she leaves Ponyville in efforts to get away from it all. That's what she tells everypony else, of course. Really, she wants to find her mother. But on her adventure, she finds everypony is different in their own special way.
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Sad, but intriguing. Good start. Wonder if she'll meet any familiar faces along the way to Las Pegasus. Maybe some Great and Powerful faces?
7954793 I love the idea! I'll make sure to include that in my story. Thanks!
7954903 Heh! Thanks. I think the enormous contrast... and interesting similarities in their personalities would play off well against each other.
If you're doing a long, lonely adventure fic, don't forget to stop and chew the scenery. It's really fun.
I'm curious though, how long are you planning this to be?
7955176 Well, I don't know how long. Most of my stories are just improvisation and I go where my imagination takes me
I don't believe the dichotomy between Scootaloo's attitude here in your work and on the show entirely makes this situation unbelievable, but perhaps a little bit background as to how Scootaloo arrives at the conclusion that she doesn't belong in the community would benefit this chapter a bit. Perhaps this is a design choice to allow us to try to piece in the missing details further on down the road, but if that's the case I don't think the setup was adequate. In light of this, however, you have an interesting premise and I shall read on to see where you take this.
I'm not entirely sure how being fearless equates to being safe from real danger, but carry on!