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XenoPony


Hi, name's XenoPony. I'm an avid pony writer and fan fiction author with a wide range of stories.

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Unless you meant brides, you might want to check that title.

Actually, whether you meant brides or birds, you will still want to check that title.

Well, this was the last pairing for Scootaloo I was expecting and I mean seriously LAST pairing I was expecting. (Aladdin's Genie style jaw drop) My mind kept going to Sweetie Belle for some reason. (Probably because they're so cute together in my mind.) Anyways, glad it's not Rainbow Dash, as that would have seriously kept me from reading this story as you may or may not have noticed I'm writing a mother and daughter story with them in it write now. Anyways, great work, and to be honest, your characters are much more likeable then they were in your last clop one-shot.:twilightsmile:

7948004 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I was wondering how many people I'd catch off guard with this pairing (one of my favorite Scoots ships) considering how little of it there is. Plus, I can see why you'd day Sweetie Belle, those two are adorable in my eyes too. As for Rainbow Dash? Well, I do kind of think Foalcon is strange too, that's why Scootaloo is aged up in this story.

Interesting, with something like this I pretty much always expect Scootaloo to be the one going Futa (Futaloo is a thing for a reason), but it's always fun to see expectations subverted.

I hope Gabby didn't cut off all ties with home or anything, if Scoots really takes to being a Mom she's gonna want Gabs to put another bun in her oven :raritywink:

This was a very enjoyable story for the most part. I only saw one instance of an error. You accidentally called Gabbs, Gapps at one point. (making for some bizarre sex pun of some sort) Which should still be there unless this page is delayed and I am commenting belatedly. To be honest, I never saw the episode introducing Gabby, having stopped watching shortly after the fourth episode of Season 6. I blame it on Fanfiction all but ruining the show for me and video games.

This was still cute and enjoyable. My favorite fetishes and all that. Only wish Futaloo was a thing, but I have to admit, this was a good paring with the fetishes involved. Hurray for originality! You earn a like and a favorite!

Is this older Scootaloo or not? Summary doesn't really tell me and the tags don't say either way. Foalcon is a pretty big deal breaker for me since I refuse to read that. You may wish to tag it 'Older/Aged Up' as well if that is the case.

7948243 It's not Foalcon, I thought the lack of a Foalcon tag would be enough to say that. But I see your point, I've added an aged up tag to the contains section of the description.

I've actually been wanting to see stories with these two together for quite awhile, and I think this is the first one. Nice work.

The picture alone made me curious

I knew this would get featured.

Nice story! :)

I really want a sequel for ths one.

Cross-species impregnation and Scoots and it's a fun story? Hooray!

This hit the feature box way faster than I thought it would O.o

Congrats on getting featured again! I'm glad I could be a part of this story, and hope that this gets all the recognition it deserves!

That was hot:twilightblush:

that's a S T E A M Y M E M E

Man, I really enjoyed this story. I may not clop, but the pairing was cute non-the-less.:rainbowkiss: :heart:

I demand a sequel

There needs to be at least three or four sequels to this really awesome story. :twilightsmile:

Overwhelmingly hot and beautiful! Loved it! :twilightsmile:

Adult Scoots and adult Gabby? Yeah. I'd ship that too...

Good little one-shot btw :twilightsmile:

I now kinda want a story about them as a couple and their foal!




PLEASE?!!!

...we need a sequel about them being together and having a foal...IT MUST HAPPEN

if a sequel was to occur (cough cough nudge nudge) :rainbowderp:
i think it would be cool to explore the effects of that potion if scootaloo where to take it :raritywink:

You need to make a sequel that is romance and slice of life where they have the goal together and love and stuff. Seriously, this story was not like others. It's wasn't just clop. It was beautiful romance a well.

Paragraph 8: "hand(l)ing"...?
Paragraph 18: "...to (be) left..." and "...to(o) kind to..."

can you make a reverse chapter or sequel where Scotts the futa and Gabbs get pregnant.?

I really did like the story. :pinkiesmile: You really did a decent world building here even though it was a one shot clop :twilightblush: You could really build more on this couple creating a sequel as they live together and raise their foal. :twilightsmile: Still it was a wonderful story that was much more that clop to a point so I have to say thanks for writing it. :raritywink:

The grotesque and frankly unnecessary description of Gabbys "cock" growing honestly turned me off from the rest of this. Blatantly unsexy. The stuff before that was decent enough at least.

You did a really good job my friend and I think you've made Gabby very sexy to me now:twilightblush:

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I'm interested to know: why the dichotomy of hen with tom? I can imagine you didn't go with "cock" since that could get confusing. But is that tom like a cat, or tom like a turkey? >.>

7986595 The terms were actually added by my editor. Before that, I just used the terms griffin and griffiness. But after reading it I assumed it was Tom as in cat and Hen as in chicken or other bird. (I didn't even know one could refer to a Turkey as a tom)

7986595 I chose 'tom' because griffins are indeed half lion, and I personally think 'tom' sounds better than 'lion' or 'cock/rooster'.


As for 'hen', I decided that that sounded better than 'pussy/lioness', though I suppose that in hindsight 'queen' could have worked as well, if we're going entirely on the cat-half of the griffins.

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7993696
Mixing the origin of the terms does speak to the biological duality of griffins, though. It's a nice touch.

Over the past few weeks, I've been seeing this story a lot, and everywhere. Now that I've read it, I understand why it's so popular. :raritywink:

Is it possible for you to make a sequel to this?

Birds of few feathers always Fuck together

Hello old friend, it's been awhile and I'm wondering if you are ever going to make a sequel?

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Any chance for a booru number for an uncropped version of the pic?

Gabby with a cock would not be safe from me ever. I'd end up with a restraining order.

9080265 She's good with either extermaity. :raritywink:

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