The Equestrian Box, an object of legend said to drive all the open it completely insane. As rumors of it resurfacing start to rise, Princess Celestia has no choice but to send her apprentice Twilight Sparkle and her friends to search for it. Along the way they encounter new threats, a forgotten god, a mysterious train, as well the lost city of Shadow Mane and it's mysterious ruler who is believed to be a Vampony. Will they find the Equestrian Box before someone loses their mind to it or will it be used to drive all of Equestria to insanity?
Set Sometime between the end of Season 2 and before "Magical Mystery Cure".
Co-written by Videomaster21xx who helps me keep everypony in character And was nearly driven insane after Zecora's inclusion.
Dark and Tragedy tags ticked for content in later chapters, but don't plan for anything that couldn't be shown on daytime TV.
This is my first Pony Fic, and had planned for the first chapter to be longer; but decided to break the second half into part Chapter 2 as I felt there was a good stopping point and wanted to have a story on here.
Is this supposed to be similar to a quest for Pandoras Box?
Also, in the description: drive all the open > drive all who open
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While there may be some possible similarities eventually they aren't planned, nor was this wasn't inspired by legends of Pandora's Box . Much of this came from a dream I had and just had to convert it into a story.
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Just curious based on the description, you should still fix that typo though.
I'll read yours if you read mine?
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Typo?
As for your story... heh. I've got Element of Generosity Queued up, so yeah I'll read it soon.
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in the description: drive all the open > drive all who open
as well the lost > as well as the lost
and it's mysterious > and its mysterious
“Tell me about it, that was an actually scream instead of her usual whimper...”
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Code Ment is awesome.
> Last Time I
> Forest. ”Everyone
> importance; and you’re : take out the and
> The reason you even wish to know of it I admit find even stranger : That you wish to know of it, I find even stranger (the admit messes it up, and nopony's mentioned a reason yet)
> as she speaks with the strange zebra. : that's kind of superflous
> and recall in pain : recoil
You accidentally double posted the first half of your story, ctrl+f : “Rainbow, not to be a nag or anything, but now would be a good time to ‘Shed’ some light on our plight?” Rarity managed to call up to the two pegasai, while doing her best to keep up with Twilight.
to find the spot where it repeats. I'll continue reading this when you fix that. So far it's been pretty good, I'm not terribly interested in it, but adventure stories aren't really my thing.
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I think I've fixed the repeating.
Stoned? Woahhhh maaaaan hnyaaaa
Stoned? Woahhhh maaaaan hnyaaaa
Given a few flaws in the story which I've explained here, I won't be accepting this story into the Goodfic Bin.
If you ever try to fix stuff in the story, do give me a call when you're done.