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Spike woke up to Twilight running around the throne room, screaming her head off. After he went down to see what's wrong, he finds that Twilight can now see into other universes. The results are... interesting, to say the least.


Coverart by SoarinArts

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Comments ( 29 )

Well that was a trip.

That was... Cheesy.

You could say Twilight opened her eyes to new possibilities.

7910351 Ya never know. She might have drunk some bad tea... ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

7910475 Yes... Indeed... :twilightoops:

7910749 I blame the other sans for those puns. He puns Tatsurou's crossovers a lot. :twilightsheepish:

Wow. Okay, time to grab my hidden blade.

7912767 Dude. That toast is trippin' balls.

7912767 space toast! :derpytongue2::pinkiehappy:

Behold, the power of Vegemite! :pinkiehappy:

7913113 Yes! *Hi-fives you while riding on the back of a flying kangaroo, throwing Vegemite to the people*

AUSTRALIA!!! :yay:

7913664 :rainbowlaugh: Trippin' balls, man. Trippin' balls.

7914708 I thought you'd like it. :raritywink:

OH MY GOD SHE HAS PINKIE VISION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

8012427 That... actually makes a lot of sense... :rainbowhuh:

8012764 which is funny cause pinkie is always trying to be random and I think not make sense that is up in the air for me lol:pinkiehappy:

8267320
They're just so... cheesy... :twilightoops:

Really great and hilarious read! Well, the Sparkle waifu was maybe a lil' bit too much random to my liking, but otherwise I really enjoyed all the exaggerations, jokes and twists :trollestia:
One thing I noticed; If you have a direct speech followed by a speaking dialogue tag, it should end with comma, not a full stop. (Question and exclamation marks stay unaffected.) Just like this:

"...Starswirl's manuscripts." she muttered

No.

"...Starswirl's manuscripts," she muttered

Yes.

PS: If Twilight is able to see the separate AUs, I think she could set up an advisory centre for those standing before some vitally important choice. Just like, "What AU may I create if I wash my socks today and not a month later?" :pinkiecrazy:

8408728
Glad you enjoyed! Really this story was just me trying to see how much ridiculousness I could cram into a story without going nuts. And a Twilight Sparkle AU advisory sounds like a pretty good idea... Sequel maybe? :applejackunsure:

8409893
Well, it was still pretty sound and funny, unlike many other random stories around. Well, feel free to write it if you wish. I'd gladly give it a read :twilightsmile:

"WHERE IS SPARKLE WAIFU!?!" she bellowed, frantically peering around the room.

:rainbowlaugh: ...Good taste Celestia :moustache:


But honestly, this was really quite entertaining, i rarely laugh out loud from reading stories, no matter how funny they are, but this one....well it didnt make me laugh out loud, but it did have on the brink of it.
Seriously though, well done. MOAR!

"WHERE IS SPARKLE WAIFU!?!" she bellowed, frantically peering around the room.

:rainbowlaugh: ...Good taste Celestia :moustache:


But honestly, this was really quite entertaining, i rarely laugh out loud from reading stories, no matter how funny they are, but this one....well it didnt make me laugh out loud, but it did have on the brink of it.
Seriously though, well done. MOAR!

8440160
Thank you! That means a lot to me! :twilightsmile:

The drake could now see the magenta irises in her eyes were now replaced with a swirling whirlpool of vibrant blue.

:facehoof: Twilight's irises are purple, not magenta. Magenta is Rainbow's irises.

"WHERE IS SPARKLE WAIFU!?!" she bellowed, frantically peering around the room.

:applejackconfused:

"Hmmm…" Celestia scratched her chin. "This appears to be some form…" she turned to Spike, who had started stroking Twilight's mane. "…of eye… "she finished, puffing her chest out proudly.

:rainbowlaugh:

"Congrats, Lulu." Celestia rolled her eyes. "You're depressing."

:facehoof:

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