Okay, let's get this out of the way. My name is Peek, and I'm a changeling.
So, ponies arent that bad. Who knew? Well, the thing is that I've been tasked with infiltrating Princess Twilight's social circle, and somehow turn the Elements of Harmony against eachother. Should be simple, I mean, I've done things like this a hundred times before.
But, guess what, these ponies are friendly! And I hate to say it, but I think I've taken a liking to these fluffy fleshbags. They're my friends, and I don't want to hurt my friends.
But one thing that's been on my mind lately, I can't keep this up. I can't keep lying to my friends. But how would they react? I mean, they haven't had the best experience with my kind. I can only hope they can be as accepting as they are with actual ponies. But on the other hoof, if I don't follow through on the mission, I'll be kicked out of the hive. I'll be all alone.
I guess I'll have to choose...
Does this story take the events of To Where and Back Again into account?
7668776 Haven't seen it yet so no? Might find a way to work it in if I can make it work though.
Edit: Added a little bit to the prologue to acknowledge the S6 finale. I'll try to put in a few nods to it into the main story too.
He has invoked Murphy's Law. May Cele...Chrysalis have his soul...
7737852 Heheh. Yeah. It's only a matter of time until things go wrong... *Rubs hands together villainously* Mwahahahaha!!! Or, y'know, he could be fine. Could go either way at this point...
Just read the story. Decided to follow it. Pretty well written so far, gonna wait a bit before rating it.
7760273 Hey, thanks! I'm maybe half (?) done with chapter four, so stick around for that!
Hmm... I am intrigued...
Carry on.
*Shakes in delight*
Yay update!
And potential shipping?
You know what? I'm giving this a thumbs up!
Keep up the good work!
7791349 Haha hope you enjoyed! And no, probably no shipping there. There might be, but nothing as of yet.
7791910 Hey, thanks! Your support is greatly appreciated!
7792476 Might is all I need.
Well shit.... i can't say i didn't see this coming... He did tempt Murphy...My any god's and God's save his soul.
I want more!
8088581 Well, it was inevitable. And seriously, he's practically got a Murphy magnet taped to his butt.
An update AND cliffhanger?
Can't wait for the next update!
8095656 I'm not going to give too much away, but I'm just going to say that in chapter 6, Peek f*cks up. (Just a little tho.)
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Ermehgerd. Seecrts!
This has my interest, I like it! ^=^
8185522 Thanks! Glad you're enjoying!
like
8185886 Thank you!
This has more then earned a spot on my favorites list. Please keep up the good work!
8191549 Aw, thank you so much!
Good chapter, very well-written reveal scene. I approve.
8201830 Thank you! (I was worried that it would come across as out of place, but I'm glad to see that people like it! ^*^)
(grins and turns to the side) Oh Muuuurphyyy~
This is an entirely reasonable and justified response for anyone experiencing Pinkie's Pinkieness for the first time.
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Dude, shhhhh! You know not to tempt the almighty Murphy!
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But don't you see? I'm not tempting Murphy...
I work for Murphy.
It's actually a pretty sweet gig. As long as I inform him whenever I notice an invocation of his law, I myself am granted immunity to it.
And it. Is. Worth it.
Given that "kamikaze" refers to suicide attacks, you probably want to say "dive-bombing pegasi". The latter phrasing has a meaning that applies to biological attackers:
(eg. You can refer to birds dive-bombing a cat to drive it away from their nest.)
I can't wait to read what happens next
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Aw! Thanks! Read on, my good horse!
Hope this gets updated its so good