The Elements of Harmony have been corrupted by dark magic, taking the mane 6 with them. The mane 6 have been transformed into demented, chaotic, violent mirrors of their former selves, wanting nothing more than to have Equestria all to themselves.
With the two sisters defeated, who will step up to save Equestria now?
Well, Pixel was supposed to, but he's kinda freaking out right now. Give him a minute.
This is sort of a catalogue of my progress as a writer. I started with an idea and little to no skills in the area of writing, and over time, I've gotten better and better. The earlier chapters might be a bit hard to read through now, but seeing how much I've improved is encouraging to me.
Chapters (14)
First story, eh? This looks interesting. I'm glad to see you didn't make your OC a Gary Stu like so many other's would on this site.
I expect great things.
6986344 Thanks! All the support I've been getting is awesome!
A good strong start.
6998376 Get ready, buddy. It's about to get wild.
Good start looking forward to more
Over 100 views in under 12 hours? You guys are bucking AWESOME!!! And weird, but mostly awesome!
7754494 Its mostly serious, but it does have its moments of stupidity. Rarely though. Really depends on how I'm feeling and if I can work it organically into the story. If you really want something a bit more lighthearted, you should check out one of my other stories, Torn or 1000 Years.
"LUNA NOOOOOOOOOO!"
Anyways this is a really good story, only thing i recommend is that you make your chapters longer.
Keep up the good work and thank you for your Time.
7755341 Thanks for the kind words! I do try to make chapters at least maybe 1500 words-ish, but I also try to stick to one central event or sequence of events, and that can make it a bit tough. I dunno. Maybe I'm just an okay writer.
This starts off dark
7759944 A little bit, now that I think about it, yeah... Just wait until chapter 5. That's when I actually start trying...
Please finish this.
7814913 Haha don't worry, I'm going to start on chapter 12 after Christmas, so hopefully not too long a wait!
7816182
Yeah!
Dude, you really need to put some tags on here like
Alternate Universe
7897527 Oh, it's not an AU. The 6 weren't always angsty douchebags.
7898144
Then why? How?
Never mind...
8080303 All will be revealed... probably...