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Wendy A Crescent


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Congratulations on the publication! You already know how much I love the detail put into Sunny's sensations, thoughts and emotions in this. It's almost as if it was written by a real life submissive. :raritywink:

those pictures made me *****

7964259 You would think it is huh? ;3 I wonder if that is true or not, Little one.

7964269 Am glad you liked them! Manifest really, really did amazing work!

I'm having a hard time deciding whether this is my favorite of your stories or 'The Makings of a Songbird.'

Oh my oh my, hope we will get to see more or this eventually.

Wonder if Ivy is actully a Demon or not in the end even if Sunny wouldnt actually be allowed to summon one.

EDIT: Congrats on getting on the featured box!

Elu

Please, add 'futa' under the spoiler.

This was an absolute joy from start to finish and it was an absolute honor to proof it for you. Looking forward to more!

I'm getting heavily implied princest implications with the ending of this...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
11:53_2/22/2017

I did NOT see that coming.

just curiosity. Is her endowment magic or something she always has?

did I mention I'm ridiculously glad that both your fics and Manifest Harmony's are increasing in popularity? It's nice to run into good erotica that scratches all my sub itches and doesn't make me feel deeply guilty to upvote. ^^

hmm... it was alright, but not enough penetration for my tastes. harping up how massive the horsecock was and then doing nothing but a blowjob with it is just kind of a let down.

7969321 Strange, I did not mean to imply princest!

7970685 Her endowment is actually entirely natural. :3

7970759 Thank you! I am happy you enjoyed it!

7972330 oh I'm glad to hear that actually~ I really enjoy your stuff, as well.

Ohhh...ohhhhh this was amazing.. just, such great, well done BDSM goodness, the domination, but with care, subtle little hints of masks breaking now and then really made it feel more real, the constant internal reminders of just how safe this really was, Sunny reminding herself of how she is in total control... and hence able to fully surrender control... as paradoxical as that is, it works. You really did an amazing job at conveying some of the best aspects of this type of relationship and both the appeal, and how hot it can be, all while keeping it realistic, even the aftercare being acknowledged.

One of the best BDSM stories I've read, again you do SO SO damn good at conveying the feelings and emotions behind it so well. Really, if I had any complaint, it's pretty much just echoing 7972000 in being disappointed that nice thick futa cock got so little playtime. The actual direct sex was a bit lacking for me, but you did SO damn good at the emotions and the whole set up that it makes up for that.

Not a Celestia fan, but good job

Ooo, I really like this one, when's chapter 2 coming out?
••chuckles• Giving you a bit of a hard time there, I really love this one. Sunny Chime... Interesting, haven't seen that one as a name for Celestia before. Sunny, sure, that's a common choice, but Sunny Chime is new to me, but I like it. What can I say, hot story, great pacing, honestly I can't say anything bad about it.

That said, there are amazing places you could go with this in a continuation. I'm still fairly new to the Clocktower Society, so while I know Rarity is an owned mare and she's introduced Twilight to the society, I don't really know what the statuses are for all of the Element Bearers
Getting back on topic, its not hard to imagine Celestia as a sub, the idea of one in power desiring to surrender their power, even for a short time, is a common trope. Now the reveal, that'd be interesting, I wonder how Ivy Rose would take it. And then there's the stuff you could do, write about Celestia's past, who Sunny is, how she's able to keep the illusion up despite a suppressor ring. Does she take her collar off, or does she hide it under an illusions spell? If all the Element Bearers are members of the society, would Celestia hold a private collaring ceremony with them, their partners and her sister? What does the future hold for her and her mistress? Do they take their relationship to the next level and marry, or just stay mistress and slave?

Many questions there, and enquiring minds want to know... No, need to know.

7980492 it'll be a bit before there is a sequel to this story. At the moment I am working on the Sequel for The Makings of a Songbird. But there will be more Sunny Chime, it was really fun to write her actually ;3 And I will definitely be getting into why she goes by sunny chime~

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I'm curious to know. My own idea is that Sunny Chime is... was? Celestia, its who she was before her ascension, her maturity name, therefore her ease at maintaining the illusion even with a suppressor ring cutting off much (2/3?) of her magic.

there's something weirdly awesome about using cute art for such a lewd purpose

8010221 Hehehe It was Manifest Harmony's idea to use inert art <3 (And she also made it)

wow this story was amazing and so heartwarming and naughty =^///^=

This was amazing. Also, the whole 'Sunny is Celestia' thing actually works. Have a like.

this reminded me of Two things:
-several comics by Piroro, where someone really summoned a Succubus and wound up as her slave...
-a story on this site called "Shifting melodies: the lost stanzas", a chapter where "Sunny Skies" (Celestia) gets chained up by "Sweet Tooth" (a changeling).

Welp, the Sol Invictus are going to be utterly wrecked if and when this comes to light.

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There are some fics I find super hot but I don't upvote for one of two reasons. One: They're of a fetish so specific and embarrassing I don't want people to be able to easily link that to an online persona I occasionally use for semi-serious purposes. Two: the fics, despite being hot, have really gross internal sexual ethics that I don't want to be mistaken for endorsing. Things you like in spite of their shit, not because of, but don't feel like having conversations about to justify that.

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While I can understand the ethical side, I wasn't aware your likes were publically displayed or accessable anywhere.

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Likes are actually entirely anonymous

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Point. It's more a "do I want to have this out there in the world" thing.

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