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All of the adorable, sexy, amazing fun!

I'd give a more in depth comment but

1. tired, is past midnight here
2. Bit odd to do that for a fic I helped edit.

Still all the amazingadorsexy fun! We need to see more of these two fuck buddies!

Very well done, loved it!

That was hot
-Dark Star

I imagine Screw's cutie mark story was amusing.
“Sweet Celestia! What happened to the toaster! And the blender! and the fridge!”
“Uh, Mom? Don't go in the laundry room, okay?”

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... that's brilliant. That's exactly how it happened now.

Even though I know it says "mechanical," I still read it as "chemical" for a little while.

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I mean, honestly? I do too, and I wrote it!

This was amazing Silent! I cant wait to see your next one!

That was very nice~
I enjoyed it very much, i hope the see more ^~^

Love this one shot story,Followed
Would be interesting if there is a sequel
Anyway,It's a good one

Cyborg sexy fun times, was there any doubt this would be awesome!!!
10/10

"My Mechanical Romance"? Yeah, that DEFINITELY hasn't been done before. Though, I guess you probably either don't know that or don't care and that added to the fact that I'm literally judging something I have no real right to judge due to not reading it, I guess I'm just wasting time here.

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Are you seriously commenting on a story just to complain that the title is a cheesy pun?

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I honestly don't remember what the hell I was thinking.

That was, rather interesting~ Love the idea overall, and it played out fairly well. One slight quibble though.

took a mouthful of her short-cut mane into his mouth.

Feels a little, eh, clunky(?) to me. But I have that sort of problem sometimes when I'm rping and it bothers me much more when I do it. So when I notice that I use the same word twice like that too close together, I try to edit it to something else.

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You're absolutely right, that is quite redundant, thanks for catching that!
And thank you very much for the compliment!

this is a really good story I liked it a lot. Also nice title pun :rainbowwild:

I like it moar.

Comment posted by fanreader999999 deleted Jan 17th, 2021

That was adorable and nerdily kinky. Love the images for this fic. Rather cute to see Candy as a companion cube. A Candy Cube I Guess... lol.

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