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Seraphem
Writer of kinky horse words, and less kinky comments that can be longer than some entire fics.
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One of my favorite lines in the whole story. It makes me laugh way harder than it should.
I can't wait to read what happens next! Great start, Sera!
Hmm, I wonder how that works. Other doms wandering into the territory would not be free to mess with. Do doms who enter the area just get a map of recognized gang territories and asked nicely to keep away?
8273242 It would mostly be the Tags graffitied around that mark the territory, and odds are yeah, most steer clear to keep the roleplay going, others that are less, polite, likely get stalked by the gang and made sure they find no action, getting to all the victims first. mostly passive ways of deterrence.
This has definitely got my attention.
8273315 YAY! Hope you like where this goes!
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I'm looking forward to it
8273511 The only one I added it to was the CTS one, because EVERYTHING in CTS is 'roleplayed' and that includes the non-con stuff. If someone else added it to one, talk to them, but it's something that is likely to be different for each person whether it counts or not.
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" This rape wasn't rapey enough, why are you tagging it as rape!?" 🤔
I'll definitely be following this, as it's very enjoyable and well written. I only sort of think the story and characters go OOC a bit too often for their own good, as I imagine it diminishes the RP experience a bit for them (and the reader) and make it less exciting.
Any idea on when the next chapters will be out? :)
8273602 True, they do break 'character' a bit, but in my defense, this is brand new to Luna and she's not quite sure how to act, and Cadance is just having fun. Once the REAL fun starts, they get more into things. But going to aim for having it out by next week. Glad you like it.
Looking good so far. Don't see this pairing often, I myself am more of a Twi Luna fan. Will keep watching for more
8273677 YAY! And not like it's shipping them, the two are just having a bit of... totally platonic fun together.
Pay no attention to the Princest warning.
I'm quite interested in this AU. It'd be nice to see more exploration of the Society and all of its glorious deaubauchery. XD
8274794 Well for that, just check out the main fic linked in the description, there are a whole lot of fics around exploring various aspects of it.
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Oh wow, I didn't even notice that.
Thanks
What's the number ?
8275149 Updated the pic with Source, just go there, click Mani's artist tag.
I feel like this is a sequel to something; they keep mentioning the first time Luna came here, which from why I can surmise boiled down to her being caught in the Rape Crescent unawares and being accidentally-legit-raped (does it count as rape in that case? It's certainly not a crime, but that is an interesting legal question. Then again, I doubt the statutes for Equestria are available online) rather than role-play-raped, and she didn't have the knowledge necessary to stop it (or the realization that such knowledge existed).
I suppose it's also possible that this is in a flashback, but I am confus.
8275663 Sequel no, if anything more a prequel to my other Luna fic. Pretty much all the fics (for now) are meant to be in the same continuity, each exploring different aspects of Luna's years with CTS, the incident she's referring to, no she wasn't 'legit-raped' but she did run into some.... asshole would be the nicest term possible... that more or less hit all the wrong buttons. It's shown a bit more in that fic, but still just a vague flashback. Sorry for the confusion, tried to keep the focus on that as light as possible versus, just having fun there this time.
Calling the sex in the story, so far, non-consensual is a bit of a stretch given the context of the story.
But regardless, it is great so far. Really looking forward to more in the future.
8275765 Next chapter is where Luna and Cadance get in on the fun personally. But this is a CTS story, and the warning does specify roleplayed Non-Con.
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Yeah, I understand. This is my first introduction to the Clocktown Society. I haven't read the original (though I have been curious). My first comment is less of a criticism and more of just an observation. I also really enjoyed the whole setup that the game/simulation thing has. Very Fallout Equestria like, and I love it.
Anyway, I still really enjoyed the story so far. I'm looking to any other future chapters.
8276462 Thank you, and yeah, did draw a lot of inspiration from FO:E, glad it showed. Glad you enjoyed it. Stay tuned, the best part is coming up, aiming to have a chapter up once a week, and only three more to go. And have fun getting into the rest of the amazing works other CTS members have made.
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There's another story somewhere on here that explains a lot of it, if not in excruciating detail. Its called "Luna's Guide to Pleasing Your Master" and its written by the same author. I quite liked it, though I didn't realize this was a sequel at first.
8277398 Yup would just be in the Author's Tab.
And it's not technically a sequel, not a direct one. All my Luna fics are all in the same continuity and just different points along Luna's journey. Since it'll be jumping around timeline wise, (Guide was in the 'present' of the CTS fic, which is about 'a few months from now' show timeline wise. This one is pre-Wedding, next fic will be after the Tantabus ep, etc... ) be hard to get a solid 1. 2.3... order. So only marking those fics that are DIRECT sequels to others as such. Ideally will try to keep each fic stand alone and working well with just it's own story.
Yay, on schedule and better than expected!
8288924 Thank you. And now to make sure the next chapter does so as well.
While all this is going on, for some reason my mind turns to Shining. While we can infer he's alright with this, likely on the condition that his wife give a full report after the fact, what exactly is he doing now? Is he busy at work, or perhaps relaxing in another part of the society? Maybe he decided to surprise his wife and will turn up later? Just something to think about.
8289005 Well not his wife quite yet, Cadance did say in the first chapter this was still about a month before the wedding. But yeah, Shining needs to get a nice present from all this...
Although now that I think about it, I'm seeing him right now, being off in some barracks DMing a game of O&O for a bunch of guard buddies and having a blast.
Good chapter, really liked how you wrote the Griffin. And really the entire gang in general.
I would've had the Griffin whisper into Luna's ear when he slammed into the ground the first. "Are you, ok?" Before returning to the roleplay.
Just as another 'yes, this a game' moment, even though that's just me. I did love when you put raping in quoations though, that was great.
I did notice a few moments where it was difficult to distinguish Luna's thoughts and the Griffin speaking, however.
Regardless, I look forward to next one.
Is it weird that I am imagining how my own characters would react in this situation?
Huh, I wonder how joining a gang like that would work in the Society. 🤔
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Hmmm, fair enough and a possibility. But at the same time, he wants things to be as good for his subs as possible, as 'real' as they can be made, so tries to break character as little as possible. He did pull the shove at the end to not hit to hard, and if Luna showed any signs of being hurt he would have checked. But beyond that there are times the Dom simply has to trust that the Sub will safeword if things are to rough.
Hmmm, will have to watch for that.
Hopefully it'll be up on time, but it'll be soon. If only to get Mani to stop whipping me so much to get it done. (And not the good kind of whipping.)
Nope, not at all.
Glad your enjoyed the story so far, and thanks for the feedback.
8292383 Likely just find whoever is in charge and ask to join, each gang would have their own policies about who and how to join. They aren't really 'official' things, just a collection of Doms that band together to increase the fun.
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To elaborate on me having a difficulty of telling the difference between Luna's thoughts and the Griffin speaking.
It mostly has to do that there's no break between paragraphs. I'm reading the story believing that Luna's is just having her own 'submissive thoughts' (can't think of a better term), and then when I reach the end of it I see a quotation. And I go "Wait! This was dialog! Shit!" Then I have to go back and reread it. Not that big of an issue. More of a minor inconvenience. But, there you go.
I notice this happening twice, near the end of the story.
seems like they are having fun.
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Ah, I see.
I have to praise you for the great banter between Luna and Cadance also Luna's thought process when she almost unleashed her magic for real was effective to make me realize just how caught up she was in the roleplay.
With several mentions of the "pinned down then ravished by multiple stallions one after another" line I do hope to see that come true for Luna and/or Cadance. And I hope each ravaging is properly described and not just summarized in a one sentence "And then stallion after stallion rutted her" that so many stories use to save time or because they're afraid it's too repetitive.
8294377 So very glad you are enjoying it and very glad the banter and thought process worked so well
As to your other thing Well, Cadance isn't going to want to push Luna too far too fast, so these three are all they are getting used by this trip, but plenty more Luna stories coming, and definitely revisiting this place and letting Luna get better acquainted with the entire 'gang'.
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Ok, good to know. Will Cadance also be better acquainted with the whole gang at some point?
always fun to see this story updated. I dropped the book i was reading just to make sure i could read this latest chapter and cant wait for the next one.
Great chapter, best yet. By far.
I loved everything. The sex scenes were great and enjoyable to read. I see this story less the stereotypical clop you tend to expect on Fimfiction and more an actual story. A story that just happens to have sex. That's not an insult on other clop fics, it's just true. Most are just that sex, not much else. I only other clopfic that I have read that even comes close to this is Velvet Touch by MadMaxtheBlack. Note: I'm still reading the original Clocktower Society.
But this is different. This actually has a story that not just this character fucks/gets fucked by this character. Characters that aren't just there to be fucked. True characters with motivations. Thoughts, feelings. I love all of them. Nova the least, but whatever. Someone has be at the bottom.
Luna is amazing. The story being done completely from her perspective is a great choice. The Griffin is great. I loved him as a dominant and during the breaks in play that happened in this chapter.
I loved Wood (I get his name, it took me forever but I get it). His certain towards Luna was perfect.
I loved everything!
I know this story isn't done yet, and I look forward to the final chapter, but whatever. This has earned a placing in my top five best stories that I have read of all time. A list that includes Fallout Equestria!
8296947 Maybe. (Sorry for the late reply) but keep in mind when this is taking place. She is about to be very, very busy for a while. But will get her into the slave camp at some point.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoy the story that much, hope the last chapter, and future fics holds up to that quality.
8307488 This... this I just.. this is.. I don't even....
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This is my only reaction to that. Thank you SO much and.. and.. given FO:E is just, one of the greatest stories I have ever read, that is some very, very high praise indeed. I am so glad you love this story that much and I've done my work making this come across well.
I'm also, not really shocked, but glad Gregor seems to be so well received, totally going to have more fics with him in the pipeline, he turned out to be really fun to write for. Nova... yeah he's a bit of a tool and, well the Society has all kinds. He's not really meant to be well liked, even the other gang members are just "Oh yeah, that guy that hangs out with us sometimes." about him. But glad Wood came over well.
I fully agree, stories, that just happen to have sex in them, but still focus on plot and characters are the best. Have plenty more planned, and hope you like them as much as this one.
Again thank you SO much for that comment, and look forward to delivering more high quality kink in the future.
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Same.
8309229You get a derpicdn.net/img/view/2012/12/19/187223__safe_screencap_pinkie+pie_the+cutie+mark+chronicles_animated_dilated+pupils_earth+pony_ei_eyes+on+the+prize_filly_filly+pinkie+pie_happy_hub+lo.gif too.
Really nice. I still think the plentiful OOC moments kill the immersion (which you even acknowledge in the story) and can be done without, but I've come to understand that going for full immersion isn't even a goal of yours, so it's not really fair to criticize. Still plenty hot regardless.
Also, why did the griffon reprimand his underlings last chapter when they were fucking Cadance? It seemed to have something to do with the type of collar she wears, but I don't know what it's supposed to mean.
8309392 Yes, one of the things I love most about CTS fics is that 'immersion breaking' and keeping clear that, in story, this is all a game, an act. It's just ponies (and others) having sexy, kinky fun and acting out desires like this, all while being safe and consensual. There are two stories at play, the story of a group (really large group) of ponies (and others) all coming together to share their love of kinky sex as part of a massive, secret BDSM club, and the stories they themselves craft to do so. I simply prefer to focus on the former. But can get people preferring a focus on the latter. As you said, just personal choice in which you prefer.
The collar is a bit of CTS setting rules. Submissives' collars can sport any, or none, of three colored bands to quickly show certain types of play they are interested in without needing to break the immersion of being in play to ask, or to simply let a potential Dom know if they are into what he wants. Both Luna and Cadance have Gold and Orange bands which, respectively, denote an openness for calmer, gentler, more caring Masters that are more looking to take care of a pet/slave type play, and also an openness for harsher, more discipline heavy master's who will not take 'no' for an answer, giving explicit consent for non-con play. What Cadance lacks is a purple band, which shows an acceptance of open degradation and objectification. Such as the way they three males keep referring to Luna as stuff like 'Slut' "Whore" "Cum-dump" etc... and just treating her like nothing but a sex toy. While he treats Cadance more like a prized catch, something to be cherished and treated well, while still being a slave of course.
Nova started crossing the line with how he treated Cadance. Specifically the line
As you've likely noticed, Gregor rather prides himself on taking good care of his subs and keeping everything as comfortable and enjoyable for them as possible, so is quick to put a stop to stuff like that. And it was just Nova, not both of them he was warning.
Hope that answered your question.
I'm sensing a bit of tension between Nova and Wood. Nova seems to not really give a damn about taking care of subs, but Wood seems to make sure they're always comfortable. Even if they're into being degraded.
This line in particular suggests that Wood isn't necessarily accepting of the term "Bitch Breaker" and might be annoyed with Nova over this. They might even be disliking of each other because of other dissagreements. Such as disagreements over how they should treat subs. Wood would believe Nova to be a heartless asshole, and Nova would think of Wood to be a pussy.
...did I really just do a character breakdown for a clopfic about a secret society of kinky sex lovers...?
Eh, whatever. #YOLO
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Yes, yes you did. And not just that, but you got it a good deal of what was being set up. Very nice catch and glad that came through well. Though it's not quiet as extreme as you paint it. Nova isn't an outright asshole, Gregor wouldn't keep him around if he was. But he is a bit of tool and not exactly the most popular pony in the gang. Wood has no issue being rough, but doesn't want to really hurt them, so goes slow and cautious till he's sure they can handle it with him.
Also, you did character analysis, I outright thought our, developed, mapped out, and created fleshed out characterizations, motivations, backstories, and personalities for side characters in a pony clop story about two Princesses getting 'raped', who could have served their role just as well even if they were just mindless male fuck-bots pretty much. Which is worse?
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Gotcha dude, thanks. I just happened to read that particular piece and thought: Huh, that's a funny detail...
I've learned to pick up on character interactions like that through other stories I've read. But it was a neat little line that hinted at what they thought of each other but didn't give anything away. Plus you hinted at what they are like personality wise through their dialogue, again without giving anything away. The reader has to put together the pieces themselves... which is pretty damn funny considering this is a clopfic.
And I'm not really sure what you mean by "which is worse."
Could you elaborate please?