The Solar Sons

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Thunder--Clash

Thunder--Clash #1 · Jan 22nd, 2017 · · ·

Interesting story, I'll keep an eye on this one

REDMAMBA

REDMAMBA #2 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Havent started reading, but you say, 'Rated mature to be safe, yet your rating is 'E'

Night--Mist

Night--Mist #3 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

7889651 Eep! Gotta change that. Thank you.

Lighting Ace

Lighting Ace #4 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

Shouldn't you put the human part there, considering the 2 protagonist are humans?

Night--Mist

Night--Mist #5 · Jan 23rd, 2017 · · ·

7891113 Good catch. I didn't even think about that. Thanks. What do you think of the story so far tough?

Lighting Ace

Lighting Ace #6 · Jan 24th, 2017 · · ·

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I'm confused, usually in this type of stories its an accident or Discord doing, now you are telling me that Laura alicorn was the copy right of kidnap possible kill and reincarnate 2 friends into colts?

I imagine you have a plan into that, and how to justify erasing 2 humans from their families, so I will not say anything. So far its promising, and it could be something I'm intrigue to know if this is with the show or is the gap of 1000 years before the show with them being or not being immortals, so yeah I want to see what happens next

Carolusrex1

Carolusrex1 #7 · Feb 1st, 2017 · · ·

This is just a pet peeve of mine and not a complaint so feel free to disregard this. I'm not a fan of the name Morning Star because it is one of the names for the devil.

The Radiance

The Radiance #8 · Nov 7th, 2017 · · ·

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And for an brutal melee weapon

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #9 · Sep 28th, 2018 · · ·

As they escaped falling debree, they were just about to the other building which was more structurally sound for this event, when all of the sundden, the gorund cracked around them, leaving a gapping hole deep beneath surrounding the little piece of earth that had not fallen with the rest yet, and no ledge near enough to jump across. Just as they were about to call for help, the platform they were on suddenly gave way, and they fell with it. They began to scream as they fell deeper and deeper. "............ We're still falling!" Night Mist identified.

Ground, I gotcha fam ;)

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #10 · Sep 28th, 2018 · · ·

By this time, the doctors had left the Solar family and their friend alone for the time being, so this recent part of the conversation went unheard by them. Twilight Clover was about to counter her ruler's teasing, but soon Celestia's attention was drawn to her two sons who lay in her arms. "Oh, goodness. I think their getting hungry. Twilight, would you mind waiting in the lounge while my son’s and I have some privacy?"

Sons, I am a grammar nazi!

The-Hidden-Fox

The-Hidden-Fox #11 · Sep 28th, 2018 · · ·

welp, the coot is done for now, time to go and red 8 chapters of whatever I have being tracked

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