Welcome back also great chapter but can you make them a little longer?

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Thanks and of course, just wanted to get this chapter out

Great googlymoogly welcome back!

Holy shit this chapter actually came out before HL3!

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I know, scary right

... And he's not the least bit suspicious

good to see a knew chapter though

Where'd he get the bow and quiver?

Did he find them randomly?
Did he get them from Zecora?
One of the Princesses maybe?
Did he make them himself from scratch?

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I qm pretty sure I mentioned that Zecora gave them to him the previous chapter

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She did.

I probably should have re-read the last chapter, given the time between them.

ihope lexi make mare6 and the princesses understand

the story went from one to ten really fast... not that it's bad but there should have been fillers and story progression to give it more weight, not go "I'M ALIVVVVVVE!" "Help me." "OKAYYYY!" I like where it is going, but slow down and take your time and you could make a great story.

This is getting [insert smart word for 'awesome and intense' here] I can't wait for the next chapter!

are there be new chapter?

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Sort of, i rushed this story way to fast and am just currently restarting it but my swamped at work and haven't had the chance to jump on it yet. So i am extraordinarily sorry about the wait

it fine. i hope you try to write new chapter.

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Yea, it all comes down to when i have time and motivation really

great. also, did you hear the news about mlp fim? they said season 9 will be the final season for mlp: fim.

Is this story cancelled or not?

Not too serious work, but it could have turned out better if it had been done well.