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dibs1337
26 year old. [possibly] assistant manager to be at a gas station. and a gamer. all while being closet brony.
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Im not sure how i feel about your story. Im no stranger to having bad things happen to the main character but it feels like your setting yours up for one hellova knockout blow.
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sadly a week later she was still hit by a car.....and I loved that cat. I didn't sleep for a week straight.....other than 4 or 5 small 10 minute knocked out intervals by the medication I had....
I just tried to be original. So I decided to use something that really happened to me. Although I was much worse than just an ankle. i had my chest wrapped up, left forearm had a hard cast, right ankle wrapped up, whole right leg in a cast and suspended, and a hard METAL neck brace. I did NOT like it.....and that was when I was in high school, and I DID protect mimzy.
But if you don't like it that's fine. I'm not gonna try to interest you in it. Like I said this is my first fan fic, so if people don't like it, that's their choice. I'm just glad I'm finally able to focus my mind on something.
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I believe i said i wasnt sure how i felt. I havent decided if i like it or not yet. Ill let you know flat out if i dont like it
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And I don't think I said you DID dislike it
I said IF you dislike it. That it is fine. Different people have different tastes, different ideals. And I respect that. Even if others don't see it, every person is unique in that way. New tech, evolving, learning, everyone will have different thoughts, no one will ever have the same thought on EVERYTHING. You both like games, but one dislikes soda. That makes you different. And that difference makes every person unique.
But if you brag about how things are bad, then that isn't right. I respect everyone's choices they make. Even if I don't agree with it.
But it's their life, all I can do is give my thoughts in a kind manner, and if they ignore that advice...eh...,more power to them I say....and I hope and pray that they live a good life, and nothing happens to cut it short for them.....
unless it is really bad of course.....that is different....
6382335 I like the story, the whole 2 chapters of a story
any way I have noticed you are putting daniel, from the story, through so much. Ok. First you hit him with a car, OK he's unlucky. Then he runs into a door, gets beaten senceless by rainbow dash and gets taken away by guards. Like Daniel is really unlucky....... It's kinda funny 
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its a self insert of me and i am unlucky XD
also, he didnt get beat up by rainbow, she flew at him with the INTENT of hitting him, but she got caught by raritys magic before the hit happened. the shock of what happened hit him and he fell back when he got his senses back. XD
This is a good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
Ooh nice. I like where this is going. Keep it up. Some good mixed with bad makes for excellent character development and a good story. The only thing id be carefull of is how you handle any romance you add.
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I am not a fan of just "oh hi, we just met and all I know, but let's do it" no...there may be "a crush at first sight" sort of thing, but, not a too quick to date, or, fuck, or anything. I want my story to hit 60-100 chapters, if not more. And I want it to be as good as I can. And I'm expecting to do only 2 OP moments...maybe 3, but the rest is gonna be more, realistic and such. Along the lines of "magic can make anything possible" sort of stuff. Because it IS true. Magic has no real limit to what it CAN do, it's the USER that makes the limit.
And should I ponify Daniel in chapter 4 or 5?
And I will NOT let clip fans get to me. If they don't like hoe I am doing my story....than I have three words for them....
http://media.tumblr.com/5b6587f7e31b4c480812782481bb2786/tumblr_inline_mq80b40A9m1qz4rgp.gif
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Id say ponyfy him when it feels like the right time to do so. I know it sounds odd but when you really dig into writing somthings will just feel right and other things wont depending on whats happening with the story. I apologize if that is confusing
I personally think Daniel should be ponyfied (with a name that would be more likely to be heard in equestria) in chapter 4 to give him a chance to learn how to use his Pegasus body? before going to ponyville with twilight and spike.
Other than a few small problems for me here and there, this story looks promising :) However, I'd clean up your story description. You might bring in more people if you capitalize some of those Is lol.
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I know, I plan to. I typed on my laptop, and I'm used to my iPad auto capitalizing for me.
Also, please do tell any problems you see. I will fix what I need to, and I would appreciate any help the readers can bring me.
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I will also be adding a picture of the pony look in the next chapter after its done and everything 
question is how am I gonna do the blue blood part....I want him to be a huge dick/asshole, but I want to be original as well....
Don't worry, pony name is all set up, and everything. I mean it's gonna be my ponysona since Daniel is me basically
6405263 I'm certain that whatever you come up with will be great as long as you have the mention of the name blueballs, you can never go wrong when blueballs is mentioned.
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THAT is a must of course, no matter how old THAT is, it is just fucking gold.
i.imgur.com/j75vIc8.png
I say sick Celestia on Blueblood... That or have Luna put him in his place when she gets back
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i kinda have thoughts on the luna side of your suggestion. but WHAT exactly....?
i dont think i should spoil it...
Chapter one, everyone is too stupid to live. Easily avoided confrontations everywhere, in a clumsy attempt to make the main character seem sympathetic.
Chapter two, main character whines about how terrible humans are, and then begs for citizenship in a country where half the people attack him on sight.
This fic is an affront to both humanity, and cartoon horses. I regret that I can only downvote it once.
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alright that's how you see it.
and I'm not trying to make him sympathetic, I'm making him like me. getting hurt all the time. just having generic bad luck for a day or two, then life is normal for a person that gets treated like dirt for being a pacifist, and has almost no one to rely on, not even family.
and the feelings towards humanity, is how i truly feel. mankind is a war loving piece of shit. i understand a few wars, but everyday for the past 10 years, on the news its war, war, accident, trial, war, riot, war, war, and oh whats this?! MORE GOD DAMN WAR!!!!!!
and i know what i say when i say this next phrase...but mankind....would be so much better...if mankind itself either never existed, or was extinct entirely.
but i do thank you for at least looking at my story, even if you didn't like it, and i do apologize if i seem to insult you in anyway with this reply, that was not my intention at all.
please, have a good day and/or night, sir or madam.
That was a great Chapter. cant wait to see what troubles Blaze gets into
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thanks. im planning alot of crazy things. especially with the first nightmare moon moment. i have BIIIIIIIIIIG plans for that....BIIIIIIIIIIIIG plans, that you have no idea how HUGE it will be.
or am i just hyping up the situation?
guess we will see...
dude this is good
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thanks. glad you like it.
i hope you keep liking the story too.
even when i seriously mess up...
Very nice, hopefully Blaze will someday learn to reel in his other self before it does something he'll have to live with
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other self? or...another nightmare?
i have such incredible plans here
im sure the readers will LOVE what i have planned.
This is starting to get entertaining let's see where it goes
Dam, that is one fubar nightmare!
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Oh yeah...you can say that again...and I really had that nightmare. I can actually feel the sting of the impact on the table too XD
Well hope you get some nice sleep bro.
I blame Mimsy.
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You DARE blame the best whittle kitty in the world?! How COULD you!!!
he was human we are a perfect mix of harmony and chaos and he is in a world where they are VERY definite things
Ooooo Nice Phoenix. *smiles*
If I could like twice I would
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glad to hear you like it so much.
When I first saw that picture I was like "well shit he turned into kirito... a redesign of kirito that is...."
When it got to the SAO part I swear my fist went mock one throwing my fist in the air
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it DOES mention the show XD so yes he kind of did. i mean i DO look like kirito, if i was to be turned into an animated being, i would basically look like Kazuto Kirigaya. almost exactly in fact. maybe a bit bigger, but not much.
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i had to make a small reference, to my #1 favorite anime of all time. so i used Kirito's 'new ALO' look as the reference. i AM planning another one for a 'personal adventure' chapter i have planned out.
so sao is in this hmmm cool i like it
6469485 haha kazuto would be jealous
his look alike is bigger than him
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6472387 ALO Kazuto ftw!!!!! Cuz he looks like a total BA
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SAO and new ALO are a lot alike in looks. But it's the swords that pull it off. The swords didn't match for SAO styl, but the ALO version did. Sa,e look, different materials. So much better.
So far I like it seems ur going from episode to episode sorta. Truth be told I know how to speak that language a little but
I'm getting the feeling that this will be an OC X Mane 6 minus Pinkie story
Why do the Ocs Never give pinkie any love i swear i cant find one OC x Pinkie or Human X Pinkie if anyone knows a couple please tell me the names