• Published 9th Jan 2017
  • 9,917 Views, 277 Comments

A Shadow Caught In The Sun - Zatoichi Vokunkiin



Maverick, a straight out of high school kid going right into college is playing his favorite VRMMORPG During his break before college However, something goes wrong, and he is dragged into a new world as his character.

Comments ( 21 )

Awww and I was looking forward to some more chapters:eeyup:

8570346 More of this story will continue in a sequel. I promise. As I said, this story is one of my best. And I wanna take my time with it.

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I understand, and I will await the sequel patiently:pinkiehappy:

8570364 Your patience is most appreciated :)

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Thank you, and you're welcome:twilightsmile:

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es war eine großartige Geschichte mein Freund (German)(^_^)

8570524 Well, it shall resume in a new one. So sit tight :)

That means I can officially add this to a story I reread over and over again since it is now basically complete.

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it's good this isn't getting a cut off this is a very very great story one of my favorite i was a little worried that this one was going to be killed but am glad it's getting a sort of sequel which is better then killing it i could see a lot of disappointed people and you are one of the top writers I've seen on here that i frequent i've almost read every one of your stories i got maybe 2-3 left to finish The Raven With Razor Wings was the first one i read then i have jump from one to the next after

ZE KING DOSE NOT APPROVE OF THIS CLIFFHANGER!!! Eh fucking with ya anyways thanks for ze awesome read an can't wait to see more so until there keep up ze good work.

So when is the new story following this going to be out

When is more coming?

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A garou is like a werewolf. While compelled to change at full moons, they are in total control. And they can also shift at will, but it's a rather draining process

What is this a crossover of?

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Not a crossover of anything o.o

This needs mad editing. Made it to the end because of the strength of the story, but spelling and grammar is generally a mess. Also, you shouldn't split up dialogue and the connected sentence. Ex: "I love books!" Twilight exclaimed, hugging the tome happily to her chest. Separating the dialogue from its supporting text leads to a very choppy feel.

This is a pretty good story, can't wait to see what you do for the second half.

May you find salvation in the shadows

WOOOOW this was SHIT. No offense but this story was all over the place

You messed up on the title of the game. De terra qui naturam magicam habet is [j]Land of Magical Beings. De terra magicam habet means On Earth Magic

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