Maverick, a straight out of high school kid going right into college is playing his favorite VRMMORPG During his break before college However, something goes wrong, and he is dragged into a new world as his character.
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This is good.
I need more
Yay I can't wait to read.
Omg it is really good you have improved so much since u started writing great job!
Hmm.
As always interesting beginning. Can't wait for more.
Great job, this is a great improvement from the first version already.
That was awesome can't wait to see more
I kinda miss the Dragon Protagonist...
My only question is what happen the the real guy did he getnpulled through and turned into his character or did he actually die in his room while playing?
The trio laughed and begin the journey to the lair of the boss.
Don't begin sentences with "and." It flows better if, at this spot, you replaced it with "the Night Court, and that"
I can clearly see the Overlord (Anime) reference in there and I find it amusing.
I hope this isn't like so many anthro fics that give them horse heads or snouts or makes them giants or something. It's creepy (though I can and do just ignore it).
8375419 Gonna warn you right now then. the do have pony ehads and hooves. :P
First off. God damn it pal! You created a fake game that I want to play so badly! It sounds fucking awesome! Next. Props to you man. I saw this story a while back but never payed it any mind. But just today I saw it again and I took the chance and read it. I'm glad I did. I will continue to read and watch this story for updates.
8477275 Thanks bud, I am glad you like it. And I wanna play the game myself. Too bad it's not so easy to just up and make a game :P
I'm a little confused he was about to die in game not real life so why did he need to be saved or is this game like the story SAO?
Well written but honestly the way you played out his death to send him to Equestria was kind of stupid...
The way he just uses pet names the instant he sees them is just so..... convoluted? Yeah, makes him seem very arrogant and rude. Celestial and Luna are also extremely OOC.
seems like an interesting start