Female Writer, Bisexual Writer, Smolder X Mare Crackship Connoisseur. Creator of the Smolderverse, and writer of many other kinds of clop and SFW stories (Commissions temporarily OPEN)
Rarity dates many stallions but she is better than each one of them, and the only pony aware of that is Applejack. When Rarity dates her latest coltfriend, Applejack is more frustrated and angry than before, but her friends believe she is jealous. However, they're not wrong.
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Good premise, but would use some work on the pacing and Execution. If it were a couple thousand words or so longer to give things time to build up would be just about perfect.
awesome! would you mind if I held a casting call so I could do a reading of this on my channel?