Cranky and Matilda want a child, one night one comes to them
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"Icey Lass"
the description of her matches Surprise.....
is there going to be a longer sequel? I like the idea, but I just know it would be to short for me if thre would be no sequel.
I would like to know that before I start reading.
Okay I need to read more, because till now it looks more odd than sad.
Only in the end you get somewhat an explanation of why that adoption part was rather strange.
It was strange to me that we nearly got no information about her, or that there was nothing mentioned about her parents I believe.
The explanation came a bit to late, so even if it started to make a bit sense, it wasn't really helping anymore.
It is nothign bad, but not exactly something I liked, I hoped for more.
I expected a sad backstory or something with a bittersweet ending, that would allow a sequel.
Maybe I didn't liked the writing style or the ....errr...point of view? for this story either. (I forgot the english word)