Yet another take on the future of the story The Changeling of the Guard by vdrake77. Because apparently this is a subgenre now.
This time our favourite changeling guard is assigned to guard Canterlot during the wedding. What will happen when he meets the new Cadance?
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Not bad. I like it!
I tip my hat to you
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As a big fan of Idol Hooves and his "insanity through logic" adventures I want to like this... but I can't.
There are a couple of chuckle worthy scenes, and the use of Idol's history of Cadence to expose Chryssi should be positive points, but the writing feels flat and I don't feel like I am reading Idol.
A few typos here and there, the work just needs some corrections and it'll be a tippity toppity shape to fit with the rest of the 'Idol Hooves & The Canterlot Weddding!' works we have around here! Thanks for writing!
It has potential, it just needs a bit of proofreading and tweaking. Some legitimately funny parts, and some decent Idolisms! I'm always flattered by more recursive fanfic, so thank you!
Man, everyone really wants me to hurry up and get to the wedding, huh? XD
Knowing idol I'm going to guess he said that as if he was observing the color of the floor.
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I'm okay with his antics and wedding can be skipped at all :D Let fans write about it
My only real complaint is that Twilight and the girls have met Idol before and know him, Twilight especially.
This was a really nice read.
Yeah, it could use a few tweaks here and there, but overall I am really happy to get more to read about Idol.
But as soon as the reveal happened I was hoping that Idol would expose that Shining would like to eat more timbre wolf.
It's a good read, but it is in desperate need of edditing. the main issue is wrong words, wrong words everywhere. Far too many to list.
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I expected the meme to be misspelled so hard when I read it I automatically misspelled it in my head.
And then the actual story was released and apparantly it needs an M rating
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?? No it didn't?
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Their was a fade to black scene when the wedding was going on.
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But it's ... not showed or depicted? It's implied that's what happened (because it did). That's not what a mature tag is for.
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I jest don't worry, you are correct, theirs nothing truly beyond a teen rating