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Easy breezey


"We all have to face our inner demons one day, someday,one way or another." -Easy Breezey.

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This story is a sequel to Death Come to me


[1st Person all Soarin's P.O.V]
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Takes place 3 months after Death come to me.
Soarin is struggling life without his beloved at his side.
Will he be able to survive?
Or will he move on with his NEW very special somebody?
Or will he crumble just like his fiance?
Wait you didn't know he popped the question?
Well it'll all be explained in the story.
And will he be fine and move on with his life? Of course he can...
But of course he won't do it alone. Fleetfoot,The M6,and Spitfire will help him get thru this...
Or maybe not. Soarin soon realizes that Spitfire is hiding something from him... Wait SHE'S.....
Contains:Sex implication no actual sex (My mom will kill me if she ever finds out:twilightoops:),Alcohol consumption,suicidal thoughts,Depression,Curse words,Child abuse,ETC. and Pls. If you just recently lost a loved one or got into a fight with your special somebody or just broke-up with said I special somebody I suggest not reading it until you are all OK I swear this and the following Chaps. will bring sad and painful memories.
P.S.
This is the best cover pic I can create :twilightsmile: (Yes, I make my own cover pics:twilightsmile:)it shows Soarin thinking about his life and Dash is pregnant cuz it's like a 'What if she lived?'
And Thank you so much Galop Free and Sky Rocker 21 for editing this story(Not really:rainbowlaugh:)
This is Sky Rocket's
This is Gallop Free's
P.P.S. this will probably suck since I........ I'm an armature writer :twilightblush:
and It will end up with Soarin and Spitfire living with each other so if you don't like it you may now look away:rainbowdetermined2:

UNDER HEAVY EDITING!

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 19 )

Seems like this will be pretty dark:fluttercry:

7922329 yeah.....not really

7922445 :rainbowdetermined2: wow already36 peopleread it:rainbowlaugh: and u the reference?

I think there is an incomplete sentence there in the last sentence of the story before Author's Note. There is a word missing.

7923028 yeah I ment to put that there just to be a tease the rest will be in the next chap

7923074
Oh ok. But I know what is it. I know.

7923074
It is very easy to answer.:twilightsmile:

Just out of curiosity, is English your second language? Some of the wording you choose seems to imply that. This could really use an editing and proofreading pass, especially for formatting and placement of line breaks.

7925767 yeah it sorta is even thou I use it more often than my national language and the editing *points at Gallop free* her fault:rainbowlaugh:

You're gonna kill me with confusion, comedy, and fluff, aren't you? :pinkiecrazy:
I'm ready!!!:rainbowdetermined2:

It's not Soarindash. Soarin really misses Rainbow Dash a lot. That's a sad point of view. But it was great!

Sad! It was sad.Great chapter! Keep up the good work!:pinkiesmile:

7980196 Thank you for your kind comment and YEY!!:pinkiehappy: it was soposed to be sad

Wow, Spitfire's really being a bitch in this scene. If I was her, I'd be calm with Soarin and try to get the answer out of him slowly. It was also pretty clear what he was going through. Stalking him to the graveyard was just stupid, and calling him 'sweetie' made me wanna punch her...:twilightangry2:
Great story so far!:heart:

8066269 if my mother in law reads this,she gonna go cray cray on me since she is the *makes a 4 hand and places it on chin* you speak of and so will my husband Flame thrower:pinkiecrazy:

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