• Member Since 15th Apr, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 21st, 2017

Outlaw


Swedish writer, all there is to know.

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Hey, names Bloodbeast and I'm an assassin.
What, you're not running?
Alright, then I guess that I can tell you my story.
I was created to be an emotionless assassin, ,sent to kill the royal family.
But I had other plans, so I killed my family.
But that was nothing compared to my new job, being a body-guard to Pinkie Pie.
You thought that was it, huh?
Wrong!!! Let's just say that being her crush, doesn't make my life easier...
(Pic's not mine, cred goes to whoever made it.)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 33 )

HA HA FIRST TO THE PUNCH! time to listen to rascal flatts and read!

just finished reading and lemme say THIS IS GONNA BE FUCKIN AWESOME!

I think you mean 'anthro'.

974509
That was the word!!!
I just couldn't figure it out... Thanks

To explain the basics of dragon-fire mail delivery, I will know quote a popular purple scientist:

'It's magic! I ain't gotta explain shit!':twilightsmile::trollestia::unsuresweetie::yay:

That is all.

-Jorofrarie

No proper paragraphs, a bit of grammar mistakes and it feels rushed... Otherwise good job with the story

Applejack is mine, i just know it:pinkiehappy: Thanks dude, keep up the good work

Edit: Forgot to mention:

"You-you have killed him" you killed him.

"Indeed, not even a piece of challenge" not even a worthy challenge.

That's what i would've wrote.

1242551
First one: He was a brute, they're supposed to have bad grammar
Second one: Fixed it.
Working for a storyline to your OC, it'll be something different for me.

1242630 Remember, I did say you could create his backstory and personnality

HAHA Good work spelling needs work also brb on the private messages

1406797
Hehehe...that's what happens if your computer is fucked up and you have to use your crappy smartphone.
Especially WHEN IT WON'T FUCKING WO:flutterrage:RK!:flutterrage::flutterrage:
That, and I can't spell correctly when I'm stressed :twilightblush:
Stupid school:duck:

1406897 ha agreed on the last one I HATE SCHOOL! :flutterrage: god its boring

sorry for the late comment, school and all:twilightblush:

anyway, i like where this is going

I can't remember if this story was supposed to be humanized or not...

1579396
It's supposed to be anthro-ponies.
So you're half right:pinkiehappy:

Let me know if you still need a character and also good chapter

I was wondering if i could make a character for fluttershy's guardian?

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