Hey, names Bloodbeast and I'm an assassin.
What, you're not running?
Alright, then I guess that I can tell you my story.
I was created to be an emotionless assassin, ,sent to kill the royal family.
But I had other plans, so I killed my family.
But that was nothing compared to my new job, being a body-guard to Pinkie Pie.
You thought that was it, huh?
Wrong!!! Let's just say that being her crush, doesn't make my life easier...
(Pic's not mine, cred goes to whoever made it.)
HA HA FIRST TO THE PUNCH! time to listen to rascal flatts and read!
just finished reading and lemme say THIS IS GONNA BE FUCKIN AWESOME!
Department S - Geezer
I think you mean 'anthro'.
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That was the word!!!
I just couldn't figure it out... Thanks
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No problem
To explain the basics of dragon-fire mail delivery, I will know quote a popular purple scientist:
'It's magic! I ain't gotta explain shit!'
That is all.
-Jorofrarie
No proper paragraphs, a bit of grammar mistakes and it feels rushed... Otherwise good job with the story
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kewl also first
Applejack is mine, i just know it Thanks dude, keep up the good work
Edit: Forgot to mention:
"You-you have killed him" you killed him.
"Indeed, not even a piece of challenge" not even a worthy challenge.
That's what i would've wrote.
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First one: He was a brute, they're supposed to have bad grammar
Second one: Fixed it.
Working for a storyline to your OC, it'll be something different for me.
1242630 Remember, I did say you could create his backstory and personnality
HAHA Good work spelling needs work also brb on the private messages
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Hehehe...that's what happens if your computer is fucked up and you have to use your crappy smartphone.
Especially WHEN IT WON'T FUCKING WORK!
That, and I can't spell correctly when I'm stressed
Stupid school
1406897 ha agreed on the last one I HATE SCHOOL! god its boring
Moar!
YEAH!
sorry for the late comment, school and all
anyway, i like where this is going
I can't remember if this story was supposed to be humanized or not...
it wasn't .....
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It's supposed to be anthro-ponies.
So you're half right
Kewl
I can't wait for moar
Seems good so far
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Seems legit
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Good luck Blood
Let me know if you still need a character and also good chapter
I was wondering if i could make a character for fluttershy's guardian?
Awesome
Aweseomsauce