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Battlecat


Just a random guy who stumbled into a fictional universe that actually inspired him to write.

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On the day of Twilight Sparkle's wedding Rarity thinks back over the past several months since Twilight announced her engagement. Their friendship became something more but it never crossed an unspoken line. She should have said something sooner but Rarity was silent when she should have used words. Now it might be too late.

Rarity x Twilight

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Nice one shot again, BattleCat! :pinkiehappy:

“I'll get to know him in time; it's not like I have stallions beating my door down,” she said firmly.  “What's wrong with getting married now that somepony is actually interested in me?”

She wants to marry him after the first date? Be careful Rarity, she might be possessed by a changeling! :rainbowlaugh:

WHY!?” she roars, using the Royal Canterlot voice.

You've been taking lessons from Princess Luna again, haven't you Twi? :ajsmug:

“I want to love and be loved.  Nopony has ever said they love me with such passion..."

And yet, you were prepared to marry somepony you barely knew. :facehoof:

Haha, doing these fan quote things is fun. I watched others do it before when calling out things they find amusing, and I thought I'd give it a try myself. :scootangel:

:moustache: Getting hitched to a stranger? You get used to it...
:twilightsheepish: How?
:moustache: Cherry Mac, Trenderhoof, Thunder Lame, Davenport, Two Tone, Soarin, Prince Blue Blood, Mr. Rich, JackBoot, Tom, Harry, Billy
the Stay Puff Marsh Mellow, Mr. Whipple, Rover, Time Turner...
:raritystarry: Spike!
:moustache: Nope I didn't see my name on the list.
:raritycry: Spike! :facehoof:
:rainbowlaugh:
:pinkiegasp: Now I have to make a new cake!
:trollestia: More cake is good

7785064 :rainbowlaugh: So true.

7784967: Thank you kindly! Sadly I've seen stories like this happen IRL. Loneliness is a powerful incentive to make foolish snap decisions.

7785181

I know. It's sad. I personally saw it happen.

Okay here's a like, because why the hell not? I can ship anyone with Twilight, but you pretty much converted me

Thank you for doing one of my 3 Mane 6 ships (the other two being AppleShy and PinkieDash)

-gives you a book and a diamond for Twi and Rarity-

7785255 - I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Twilight is one of the easier character to pair off, most likely because she's the anchor of the main cast. :twilightsmile:

7785324 - No problem, I'm glad you like the story! Thank you for reading.

7785634 you should definitely make a sequel

7791391 - Maybe although I'm not as sure about what I'd write for a sequel to this one. Guess we'll see. :twilightsmile:

7791511 perhaps you could write a story instead of a one shot? Like maybe that stallion Twilight was supposed to marry comes back for revenge and tries to steal her away from Rarity?

7791525 That's one possibility for sure. I'll have to see if any inspiration strikes me.

7791562 can't wait. And while I'm at it, enjoy the follow:twilightsmile:

Oh the drama! I eat it up like cake. I'm glad it all worked out in the end! Well done!

WOW!!!
Such emotion.
Brilliant!

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