Breathe

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Rarity and Pinkie like each other. Being together should be enough to make them happy, right?

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Zaid ValRoa

Zaid ValRoa #1 · Aug 14th, 2016 · · ·

I really liked this. I'm a fan of sad romantic stories, and yours was very well done. I wish we could have gotten a better glimpse at how her relationship started to deteriorate, though. That would have gone a long way to make their eventual split have more impact.

Still, I thoroughly enjoyed this story.

Well done.

SugarPinkieVA

SugarPinkieVA #2 · Aug 14th, 2016 · · ·

This was beautiful.

fallen starr

fallen starr #3 · Aug 14th, 2016 · · ·

7479785 Thank you. I was sorta of going for like a slow gradiant, and for for their relationship to end before it like, utterly destroyed their friendship as well so that's why it's like that. I do thank you for enjoying the story and the comment.

7479803 I'm happy you enjoyed it.

Voiceguy

Voiceguy #4 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · ·

7479838 Prepare yourself

fallen starr

fallen starr #5 · Aug 15th, 2016 · · ·

7481648 That sounds ominous. For what?

Inspector Brown

Inspector Brown #6 · Oct 8th, 2016 · · ·

Okay, I'm not much of a shipper myself, but you've been so nice to me I felt I owed it to you to at least read one of your stories. Relationships of all stripes are complicated things, and just because two people like each other doesn't mean a relationship between them will work. That's a reality you don't often see explored in romance stories. I think you handled this one very maturely. The best part was when Pinkie Pie chewed Rarity out for treating her with kid gloves. I could totally see that happening.

Raichu