Part four in the 'Rainbow' series. Sequel to 'A Fractured Rainbow'
After six months have passed, Rainbow Dash wants to adopt a filly. After a careful night of consideration Applejack finally agrees. Their new adopted filly befriends the cutie mark crusaders. Meanwhile unpaid pills are continuing to pile up, despite warnings Applejack decides to try and win money in the Canterlot Derby.
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Oh no
839509
Shh, it's a secret!
Well. I certainly didn't expect the last chapters to turn out like that.
Well, this storyline just took another huge turn.
Why can't there be just one calm chapter, just one!
Raven felt lessembarasse
less embarrassed*
I agree with Tchernobog, Oh no
Oh c'mon, how could you do that at the end. You... sir, have no soul
Why must you force these feelings upon me so.
Always with the time-skips you. a few weeks of sadness would be fine but you always make it years
Year no walking, year-long coma, years after that particular event. Hell, you even got ponyville involved.
"H-hi..." Scootalo said softly, still unable to move her gaze away from Raven Flame.
"Oh, hey." Scootaloo replied weakly as she stumbled closer.
"Okay." Scootaloo said in the same quiet voice
My shipping senses are tingling
843331
No way!
Dude, really
you have to keep breaking my heart like his? 
dam u, why cant u let them be happy
Five Derp Herps for you.
851988
Is that a bad thing? D:
GOD DAMNIT.
By god, this is brilliant.
852171 Getting five derp herps rivals that of getting five mustaches. :D
852186
I SEEE!
The Elements of Harmony are separated? Apple Jack has some sort of amnesia? And Raven is dead? This is sad and brilliant!
Five mustaches and Derp Herps for you!
did you rush a little? but whatever still great!
NOoooooooooooooooo!
You introduce a new character, get the reader to develop an emotional attachment to her, and then kill her off. In the same story. You sir are an evil genius. Now I'm going to go cry.
MANLY TEARS!
My heart exploded a little.
This song totally fits the mood of this chapter.
Raven Flame isn't phased by much is she?
Not gonna lie. I shed a tear or two
Save for a few grammatical errors, this story really hit me hard.
851988 What in Celestias name is a derp herp?
1314034 couldn't have said it better myself.
This chapter made me cry so badly.
Nice ending.