The second in the 'Rainbow' series, Sequel to A Rainbow Forms.
Heart's Warming Eve is approaching and Rainbow Dash has something special planned for Applejack. Now staying at Sweet Apple Acres the two ponies try to keep their romance hidden away from Ponyville. However some pony does discover their secret and soon after they find themselves being pried apart from one another.
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Readers be warned, I flunked high school. I never passed a single English class in my life. My grammar is bad and I know this. I tried to proof-read this the best I could but with my lack of education that can only go so far.
Come on now bro, we've read your last story. Unless you've intentionally screwed it up there should be no problems. Anywho imma go read this one now
can't wait to start reading this one
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Can't wait to start reading the next one you mean?
Just a little confused cause you said "this one"
833453 All of them. Still have to start on this one, will sleep first
833468
Why you post this comment on the last chapter of the story?
833473 If you post on the fic itself and not the chapter, your comment gets placed at the last added chapter
833483
LIES! TERRIBLE LIES!
Oh... Okay...
Anyway, go get sleeps, it's healthy for you.
they were far too shut their eyes now
I think a word is missing
breathe in, his hind hooves began to
twitch wildly. enter to soon
"Right now it feels like something like you are drowning. 2 like's
now I can say I can't wait to read the next one
834545
Fixed and Fixed, much appreciated as always P:
Another word is missing in the same sentence
It has to be this way:
836841
What is this sorcery! I swear I'm an idiot sometimes...
Anyway, thanks for catching that.
836903
You're welcome.
D'aaaawwww
Well done.
why is this is dark?
im loving it though, so much tension, i just have to know what happens next.
That was so dark and awesome, well done.
Well, I dont know that one day you'll be back andread this or what. But I want to say your stories were really epic!
(O\_/O)
P.S: I don't know what I just typed.
Convenience!