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TheRainbowDashShow


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Part 5 in the 'Rainbow' series. Sequel to The Rainbow Arc
With Ponyville having been completely abandoned, Rainbow Dash finally loses hope that Applejack will return to her. Setting out to Canterlot she finally begins her search for the lost pony. During her search, an unnatural grief continues to plague her mind. Meanwhile Scootaloo makes an accidental discovery during her goodbyes that leads to her own journey to track down Rainbow Dash.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 25 )

The story 'Search for a Home' contains some relevant information to this story.

I like what happened with Scootaloo but how it happened was kinda cheesy

Her mind burned with anger Applejack
I'm sorry but your word is in another castle

compared to the previous stories I must say that though the grammar is better, the story is worse. I can't complain though, it still was good. You use a lot of clichés and sudden plot twists though.:pinkiehappy:

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Eh it was mostly a set-up for the next story.
Which I still want to know how that got uploaded first when I submitted it much later then this one XD

i love and hate this story at the same time

*clap clap clap clap clap clap clap*

it made me :rainbowlaugh:

it made me :fluttercry:

but most of all... it made me :pinkiehappy:

:ajbemused: ........ :pinkiecrazy: ........ :pinkiehappy:

I have noticed that the quality with which you write increases with every story written.

You are now a great writer. Capable of wrenching tears from my eye with ease. Which shouldn't be easy considering what fanfics I have read.

I'm not going to read your latest, not yet. As it is VERY late.

But I am going to thank you for one of the most heart warming, tear jerking, awe-inspiring, clusters of emotion I have ever read (referring to series as a whole).

And you FLUNKED English class. I emphasize this not to make fun of you, but to praise you. The fact that you are capable of writing this after failing English makes me question the competence of your teachers, as it certainly doesn't appear to be a shortcoming on your part.

So thank you, sir (ma'am?), for this entertainment that you have supplied me today. And good luck with all of your future endeavors.

I saw this coming. Its official Ice Ember is the worst pony EVER!!!!!!:flutterrage:

"Why don't yah go make us somethin' tah eat while ah finish this chapter." Applejack said waving the book she still held in her hooves.
"Okay." Ice Ember said as she walked away into the kitchen.

*whip cracking sound*

Relax, we won't go anywhere Dashie!" Raven Flame said in a sweet and innocent voice.


In the words of Ron “Tater Salad” White: “Bullshiiiiiit.”

I know Ice Ember was a Bitch but her death made me cry. This whole story is a barrage of crying for me. *sniff* well done.

Bravo! I haven't had my heartstrings yanked this much since I read Chocolate covered grapes! Well done!

"What… What's going on?" Rainbow Dash said when the door was shut behind them.

"Applejack doesn't know who you are anymore." Ice Ember said placing a hoof on Rainbow's shoulder.

Rainbow Dash shook the hoof off of her shoulder, "What!"

Ice Ember sighed, "Applejack doesn't remember anything at all."

"So what, you just decided to… keep her?" Rainbow Dash asked sounding disgusted.

"What? No!" Ice Ember cried out.

"Then why didn't you bring her home, back to Ponyville?"

Ice Ember turned away, "Because…"

"Because what?" Rainbow Dash shouted, "Ponyville is where she belongs, it's her home, she had friends and family there! She is my WIFE and you just hid her away from every pony else making every pony think she was dead!" Rainbow Dash pointed around her, "Look around you, do you honestly think Applejack is happy in a place like this? So what reason could you possibly have to not bring her back to the ponies and places she loves?"

"Because…" Ice Ember frowned, "I love her…"

Rainbow Dash nearly laughed, "You love her?" she asked, "You LOVE her and your idea of showing Applejack you love her was to bring her miles away from her friends and family. You took her to a polluted city where the most natural thing here is the wood your furniture is made of." Rainbow Dash shook her head in disappointment, "Do you honestly think she is happy here?"

Ice Ember took a step back, "I think she is happy here…" she said with little confidence.

Applejack opened the door and stepped out, "What's going on?" she asked wrapping a hoof around Ice Ember's shoulder, holding her close and giving the unicorn a kiss on her cheek.

Dude, is it just me or do I suddenly feel fangs growing? I mean ones to pierce Ember with!

This story ended in its good and complete way. I am not sure that I want to read the next one since you have been finishing it yet. This series is one of my most favourite AppleDash fictions for sure. Anyway, please COME BACK and FINISH YOUR STORY! Love you:twilightsmile:

This 'reunion' was cringy. :twilightoops:

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Ya guessed it! LOL:rainbowlaugh:

Cringe-i-est work yet that I have read.

Nice ending.

Though I was hoping Ponyville could come back to normal again.

So are the other elements returning now that Dash and Applejack are back? Will ponyville ever be brought back now that sweet apple acres is back?

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