Part 5 in the 'Rainbow' series. Sequel to The Rainbow Arc
With Ponyville having been completely abandoned, Rainbow Dash finally loses hope that Applejack will return to her. Setting out to Canterlot she finally begins her search for the lost pony. During her search, an unnatural grief continues to plague her mind. Meanwhile Scootaloo makes an accidental discovery during her goodbyes that leads to her own journey to track down Rainbow Dash.
The story 'Search for a Home' contains some relevant information to this story.
I like what happened with Scootaloo but how it happened was kinda cheesy
Her mind burned with anger Applejack
I'm sorry but your word is in another castle
compared to the previous stories I must say that though the grammar is better, the story is worse. I can't complain though, it still was good. You use a lot of clichés and sudden plot twists though.
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Eh it was mostly a set-up for the next story.
Which I still want to know how that got uploaded first when I submitted it much later then this one XD
i love and hate this story at the same time
*clap clap clap clap clap clap clap*
it made me
it made me
but most of all... it made me
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Damn!
I have noticed that the quality with which you write increases with every story written.
You are now a great writer. Capable of wrenching tears from my eye with ease. Which shouldn't be easy considering what fanfics I have read.
I'm not going to read your latest, not yet. As it is VERY late.
But I am going to thank you for one of the most heart warming, tear jerking, awe-inspiring, clusters of emotion I have ever read (referring to series as a whole).
And you FLUNKED English class. I emphasize this not to make fun of you, but to praise you. The fact that you are capable of writing this after failing English makes me question the competence of your teachers, as it certainly doesn't appear to be a shortcoming on your part.
So thank you, sir (ma'am?), for this entertainment that you have supplied me today. And good luck with all of your future endeavors.
I saw this coming. Its official Ice Ember is the worst pony EVER!!!!!!
"Why don't yah go make us somethin' tah eat while ah finish this chapter." Applejack said waving the book she still held in her hooves.
"Okay." Ice Ember said as she walked away into the kitchen.
*whip cracking sound*
Relax, we won't go anywhere Dashie!" Raven Flame said in a sweet and innocent voice.
In the words of Ron “Tater Salad” White: “Bullshiiiiiit.”
I know Ice Ember was a Bitch but her death made me cry. This whole story is a barrage of crying for me. *sniff* well done.
Bravo! I haven't had my heartstrings yanked this much since I read Chocolate covered grapes! Well done!
Dude, is it just me or do I suddenly feel fangs growing? I mean ones to pierce Ember with!
This story ended in its good and complete way. I am not sure that I want to read the next one since you have been finishing it yet. This series is one of my most favourite AppleDash fictions for sure. Anyway, please COME BACK and FINISH YOUR STORY! Love you
Wut?
This 'reunion' was cringy.
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Ya guessed it! LOL
Cringe-i-est work yet that I have read.
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Nice ending.
Though I was hoping Ponyville could come back to normal again.
So are the other elements returning now that Dash and Applejack are back? Will ponyville ever be brought back now that sweet apple acres is back?