A fellow Brony, Bluthy (Don Bluth Fan), Dinosaur lover, G-Fan, and an animation student. I worked on fan fiction in Deviantart, and would like to submit them, revised, to you.
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While not Fluttershy's stare, Sonata standing there gives people a scare. What thoughts did she forbear, not many would care. So why does she stare without fanfare? Patience we must bear in understanding this affair.
Elements of the Jongojiverse can you compare, but canon this doesn't share.
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I haven't seen this many rhymes since the last time I read a Dr. Seuss book!
Haven't read it, but it uses the one side character I ship with my OC, so it's good!
That was quick!
And well thought out too. I never would've been able to pull off something like this in such a short amount of time.
Good job.
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Impressive and funny, I love it! It must've been hard coming up with all those words.
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Damn skippy it was. Even finding a rhyming website, I had to look up the meaning of words I rhyme to fit the context.
This review is brought to you by the group, "A for Effort".
Name of Story: Sonata's Stare Affair
Total Score out of 10: 6.5
Pros: The idea of a story that rhymes throughout is incredibly unique, so much so that I don't even think I've seen it before. Originality is a hard thing to accomplish, especially in the field of literature.
Cons: The flow is broken about halfway through the story, and while I understand this is most likely for comedic effect, it doesn't read off particularly well. The rhymes themselves felt repetitive and forced at some points, though I understand why undertaking such an endeavor would be difficult when it came to actually writing the story.
Additional Notes:
Why isn't there a comedy tag on this story? It definitely possesses comedic elements.
this story makes me real nervous