When a boy gets and unexpected visit from six strange ponies from another world. He is there to decide whether they can stay or hit the road...
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I really like it
its just the kind of light hearted read i enjoy. Im eagerly awaiting the next chapters
hope they dont take too long
AMAZING!
hey hey hey if your reading this comment i am debating whether to release the rest or not but i have to make a decision soon because i may not be online for much longer!
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1286834 Lol I released the third part i am quickly doing some basic editing on the 4th one then releasing it which would be the last.
gilda getting bullied and then gets pushed into a corner out of fear
there is only one thing to say HELL FUCKING YES
If anyone can draw hit me up I got a few things i'd like drawn which involve my favorite parts of the fic xP
Why does good things have to end!
1318513 What do you mean? Elaborate
You said the fourth would be tha last! or did i misunderstand.If i did im sooooo sorry
1319291 Well yes in some sense tehe but that would ruin the surprise! if there is one that is
BLOODY BRILLIANT MATE!
I may or may not be working on a secret project but I am also writing up my oc story which i had to redo the ending and parts of it that i just wanted to change. So I hope you all will read that when I do. PS The person making or made my oc still hasn't uploaded it
Year 4 will be release on the 23rd!
SNIFF....Dude that is heart wrenching.Oh god i seriesly can't stop crying!
But wow man good job and i hope you make a sequal to this story!
1324886 Thanks and I may do so!
You should make a sequel cuz thats just too damn sad
and last I checked Alex still has that IOU from Celestia, hmmmm
but aside from the heartbreaking ending i really enjoyed this story, I'm just hoping for a sequel with a happy ending, or at least an epilogue or something
I am shocked that so far I got no comments for the filly part on year four. Or the Twilight Zone reference that I put in cleverly.
Ok three things. Ok four things.
One Cute when you had the girls turn into fillies
Two never seen that kind of twilight zone episode, then again haven't seen any episodes yet
Three sad and wtf ending
And four love the story hope to see more like this story bro
Also first comment on this site evr. Oh wait first two
1326623 LOL twilight zone is a whole completely different show. Just a witty reference to that and the ending was pretty much thanks to my little dashie but don't fret over it! I've decided to make an alt ending but need some time an idea's to go into it
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Only Twilight Zone thing i ever saw was te Movie and when i went on the tower of terror two years ago. Loved it btw
Dude, I liked your story. I really did.
But that ending...
By this, I mean that the story's going along on it's merry way, then BAM, no more story. Gone, poof, nothing.
Now it isn't worth a thumbs-down, but the ending honestly came out of nowhere. Unless, of course, I missed some crucial hint somewhere in the story.
All I am saying, is the ending just doesn't do the story justice, nor can it even be surmised through careful plot evaluation. I expected the sad ending in My Little Dashie, to be honest, halfway through the story. This ending, quite literally blindsided me.
So to sum it up, Nice story, woefully undeserved ending. I look forward to a continuation
1327762 Thanks for the comment there were a few hints but not over whelming. I will make and alt ending and a epilogue that will clarify that horrible ending. So yeah but that won't be for awhile.
Well I will make an epilogue and explain the reason for such a horrible ending. Also and alternate ending but that wont be for some time and the epilogue will be pretty easy since it won't be massive or anything. So I hope you like the Epilogue!
released my OC story! total failure on my part since. I have no proof readers or anything. on got dis likes which is bogging me down immensely. Check it out and hopefully someone would like it.
1351476 Elaborate
I am thinking of doing a my little dashie parody whom thinks I should attempt such a parody?
WTF,WTF,WTF THAT CAN'T BE THE END BRO WHAT ABOUT THE I owe you from Celestia
1365058 I am making an epilogue and then and alternate ending which I know every one will love
Hmm now that i reread this story the scene with the prom reminded me of Stuck in The middle.
Don't know why though
Okay, aside from some grammer and spelling errors, I'm loving this story. There's just one tiny little thing I need to bring up....
Irony!??
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Uhhh what the hell just happened all I read was celestia giving a poor excuse for taking the ponies away and then going to see Alex and bring him to a city and then the girls get a letter from celestia and go see him and then out of nowhere he proposes to them and they accept then they get married the end
I don't like this epilogue to be honest hope your alternate ending is better than this
Bam! SEX in a can! Hahahaha!
it was an enteresting end to this story thats for sure.
You sir get a mustache
1526083 it's spelled 'interesting'
1598431 Thanks brocive i have touble with that word alot!
1599510 just remember the I
1600606 YES SIR!
But what about John? i mean he spent i'm thinking years of watching over Alex raising him and such. i would have thought that losing John would have been one of the worst things to Alex.
in the too be continued take out the second o so its
to be continued
other then that i like the story :D
very nice story.
hope things get better for you. would love to see the rest.
thou i have to ask, it seemed hinted but never went into this. alex's brother goes away but doesn't say why or were, later he finds out his brother died in the military, but shortly after the royal wedding changeling invasion. was there supposed to be a connection here?
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John doesn't remember him anymore. remember when he leaves the house to look for the girls he talks to john, and john says he doesn't know him.
I am sorry but there is only one word to describe this fic, and that is rushed. Sorry but everything just went by too fast to really develop any kind of connection to any of the characters. I won't downvote this or put it down, but it would be helpful to pull back on the throttle and really get into the story. Thanks for listening