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Love times three - Flat spin



Tender Taps, Rumble and Button Mash talk about their crushes that just happens to be the cmc . and they decide to confess their love to them but how...

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Chapter 6 ten years and three couples

MLP: FiM
Love times three
By: flat spin


”We are here today to celebrate two things.” Fleetfoot announced from the stage to the crowd. “Firstly we are here to send the first commander Soarin and Captain Rainbow Dash to retirement but we are also here to celebrate our new captain and first commander. Captain Scootaloo and first commander Rumble.” Fleetfoot finished and the crowd cheered on and went back to talking to each other.

“Hey Soarin.” Rumble said and walked towards the older stallion who was standing next to the ex-captain.

“Oh Rumble… or should I say first commander.” Soarin smiled as he walked over to him.

“Can I have a word with you… in private.” Rumble said to him.

“Don’t take too long feather brains.” Rainbow Dash said and kissed him on the cheek and walked off.

“So… what do you need to talk about?” Soarin asked.

“Remember ten years ago when you told me that I would be a wonderbolt someday with my special somepony?” Rumble said.

“Yeah.” Soarin said. “Is everything okay between you and Scootaloo?”

“Actually… yesterday after you and Dash called us to the captain’s office and promoted us I kinda proposed to her.” Rumble said and smiled widely.

“And?” Soarin said and started to smile too.

“She said yes.” Rumble said and smiled even more. “Thank you for everything Soarin… even for those crappy advices you gave me back in the days.”

“Hey most of those advices you are gonna need on you wedding night.” Soarin said and hugged Rumble. “I’m proud of you kiddo. I know that you and Scootaloo will take the wonderbolts to new heights and do me and Dashie even more proud to been your trainers and mentors.”

“Thanks Soarin.”

“It was nothing.”

“No… it was everything.”


“So…” Rarity said as she was measuring Sweetie Belle for a new dress she was making for her. “Your waist is a grown a bit.” Rarity said and smiled.

“Oh grow up Rarity. I’m not pregnant… at least yet.”

“You and Button have been married for a year I think it’s time for you two to finally to get some foals.”

“We are 22 there is no need to rush things… All thou a foal or two does sound nice.” Sweetie thought to herself. “Maybe in a year or to… I just really wanna enjoy living with him at the moment.”

“You are right that there is no need to rush things but still I want to be an aunt.” Rarity said. “So get some action going on in the bedroom.” She said with a wink.

“Excuse me but we do have things going on in the bedroom on nightly bases… Unlike you.” Sweetie said and gave Rarity a sisterly poke.

“Hey… once ponies get old you gotta slow down a bit… So I suggest you enjoy your new life with Button as much as you can because love is such a beautiful thing… Especially when you can express it with someone in an intimate way.”

“Yeah your right.”


“Apple Blossom! Could you come here!” Tender Taps yelled from the down stairs of the farm house.

“What do ya need dad?” A orange filly with a purple mane asked.

“I’m gonna go and check up on the eastern orchard. Could you go and check up on your mother.” Tender Taps said and walked out.

“Okay dad.” The little filly said and quickly ran upstairs and to her parent’s bedroom where she saw her mother on the bed.

“Oh hi Apple Blossom. You need something… Did your father already went to see that the eastern orchard is still okay?” Apple Bool said from the bed.

“Yeah he already went and sent me to check up on you.” She said and jumped on to the bed next to her mother.

“Oh well that’s nice… uh that hurt a bit.” Apple Bloom said and rubbed her belly.

“Are you okay mom.” Apple Blossom asked while looking at her.

“Yeah I’m fine… he just apparently hates my spin and wants to kick it every so often.” Apple Bloom said and laughed. “When I was pregnant with you, you didn’t kick me as much… all thou you were a quite loud little filly… and still are today.” Apple Bloom said and hugged her daughter. “You know that I’m so lucky to have a daughter like you and a loving husband like you father.”

“And I’m lucky to have the best parents in the world.”


“Love cannot be rushed…”

“You really don’t know anything about it before you have somepony you can share it with…”

“love is putting somepony else's needs before yours…”

“Just take what life has to offer and live it like today was going to be the last day of your life…”

Words of two ponies who knew what love was and because them these six ponies found out what love is too… Love is nothing if you have no one to share it with… if you don’t share love then it turns to hate…

Author's Note:

Done! this was a bit longer than i originally planned but who cares...

now tomorrow i will publish the halloween/nightmare night fic i have no idea if its good since horror is something i usually don't do... so... yeah it might be crap but i think that i have to experiment some new things and try it out...

Anyways thanks for reading and i hope you enjoyed this fic and have a nice day:twilightsmile:

Comments ( 13 )

Aw.... Misspelt Apple Bloom a few times, but all in all nice finish

THE STORY'S DONE:pinkiegasp: :fluttercry: still loved it:raritywink: and
YHEA DASHIE AND SOARIN GOT TOGETHER!!!!!!!!! YIPE!!!!!! oh and um...... scotaloo ended up with rumble and sweetie and button and tender and ab to I guess:twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:





I DEMAND A SEQUAL!!!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:










or else.........:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

7679729 oh god...:twilightoops: anyways i got something like this planned for the future... i'll talk more about it tomorrow:raritywink:

Not a bad, it was a little short but all in all not a bad story.

Nice story. :pinkiehappy:

Grammar went weird at times though.:twilightsheepish:

That was great! I enjoyed it! I like that the kids just simply waited until they were old enough to court each other.

8031416 Finally someone got it!:rainbowlaugh:

Dan

"Love is the condition in which the happiness of another is essential to your own."
-Heinlein

"Definition: 'Love' is making a shot to the knees of a target 120 kilometers away using an Aratech sniper rifle with a tri-light scope... Love is knowing your target, putting them in your targeting reticule, and together, achieving a singular purpose against statistically long odds."
-HK-47

I seems so nice but I feel like it isn't enough... Anyways I like it so much! :twilightsmile:

YES YES YES YES YES THANK YOU FOR STICKING WITH THE CLASSIC ships :scootangel:you have saved a life today buddy

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