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Journeyman


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Non-capitalized words in a title are my trigger.

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Capitalizing The First Letter Of Each Word In A Normal Sentence Is My Trigger.

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"Trigger" is my trigger!

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AAAAAAH I TRIGGERED MYSELF AAAUGH

Really interesting start.
Twi won't be able to stop herself, she will dig deeper into those dark arts.

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Tuesday's another one of my trigger words!

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It's so easy to convince yourself something bad can be for the greater good. Knowledge and magic are just tools, after all. Twilight knows what's best, of course. It's what she keeps telling herself.


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I am glad you like it. Two more chapters left, with a possible third 500 word epilogue. Now Twilight has to find out what to do with a twice dead corpse in her basement.

Pretty good. Certainly miles above other Herbert West ponifications I've read. One thing though: why did the corpse of a stallion have "meaty hands" with which to strangle her?

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It's not meaty as in lacking skin or like that, he was just, well, meaty. A synonym for brawny or bigger than normal.

7640113 Wait... sorry, my fault. I completely missed the "Anthro" tag and assumed hooves were present. I get it now.

You made a far better Dr. Frankenstein out of Twilight, and I love it.. you get a fave out of me.

OOOOHH I'm liking this.

7668080 Seems like more of a cross between Dr. Herbert West and Baron Victor von Frankenstein, but yes, Journeyman made a good one out of Twilight.

You're really hitting all the greats, now even Dr. Moreau as well.

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Movie Slate! I like that tumblr.

There is one more chapter left. It's actually done, but there is one scene that I feel could use a little more meat on its bones

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I had a lot of fun making this one. I had hoped for more gore than what came of it to better tribute the gore genre, but there is only so much to do with a concept like this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it so far.

Nice story, but one thing...

the dance of dual cutie marks

^^ I'm going to have to borrow this!

Will there be a sequel?

This really was quite a good story! I (and I'm sure many others) would love to see a sequel with the continuing adventures of Patchwork and Twilight!

I demand (request) a sequel!!! Please! <3

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I honestly did not anticipate the reaction for a sequel. I had thought it complete enough that people would read it and move on. People seem enamored with Twilight, Spike, and Patchwork's story.

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It's really well written, and this particular 'origin story' is wrapped up, yes, but I wish to know more of what happens next; how well does Patchwork mesh with Twilight's friends? What is Celestia's response? What adorably sweet hijinks arise from her meeting Pinkie? Does Twilight's work end up resulting in a boom of of pony bodies being given a second or so chance? Does Twilight or Patchwork ever end up bearing magical lesbian spawn as a gift from Cadence? How badly and for how long does Shining Armor and Twi's parents trade her about being so antisocial she had to make herself a girlfriend instead finding one normally?
And other things, of course.

Plus, that sex scene was really hot, not gonna lie. And adorable as fuck.

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there so much more that can be written, i love the story and do hope you do continue it off. It's a great storya nd I loved it.
Love to see How Sunset if she told about e reacts.
Maybe gets the same idea build ehrself a girlfriend.

This seriously needs a sequel.

Just passing through, and figured I'd comment on what caught my attention most on this story: "Wow, for being a Frankensteinian experiment, her features are surprisingly symmetrical. .. This seems appropriate, given Twilight Sparkle.

"her hands wandered all across Patchwork’s hefty body. Twilight latched onto her jiggling ass and kneaded the supple flesh"

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Why couldn't you include body-description like this through the whole story <_>

wait... thats the END?!
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NOOOOOO! :raritycry:

Excellent fic. I kept waiting for Patchy to fly into a zombie rage unexpectedly, but was pleasantly surprised she turned out to be a delightful person. I wish I could see her being introduced to Pinkie and the rest of the gang though, I feel like the initial reactions would run from both ends of the scale, but everyone would come around eventually. Nicely done.:yay:

I have the need for a sequel fam!

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I'd love to continue this somehow, but I got nothing. The closest I got to more for this is an additional scene for the fourth chapter where Spike gives Patchwork "The Talk."

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Well fam (not telling you what to do),

You could go with "The-Talk" and I am sure hilarity would ensue or you could go with like a 1-2 chapter "a few weeks/months later" thing where you see Patches going about Ponyville and people's reactions or lack-there-of about here. Hell I am sure there could be a little bit of the CMC acting cute/retarded wondering whats up with the two-tone mare. Just throwing ideas out, lord knows I should just write my own stuff but all of that has been on the back-burner for over a year.

Before I read this, what is the Gore, Horror and Dark tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?

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This story is based on the Reanimator, so expect reanimated corpses, blood, and guts. Twilight is trying to stop death. It doesn't get to bad, in my opinion, but it warrants mention.

I'd love to se a sequel to this. I know it's gorey at first, but it's so cute. Please write more of Patchwork's story.

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