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Journeyman


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[1:37:15 AM] Journeyman: I suppose in order to get into the feature box, I have to have a transsexual rarity screw her sister or something.
[1:38:11 AM] PIzor: it hard to keep up with front page fetish material
[1:38:24 AM] PIzor: maybe if you made the last one Christmas themed
[1:38:39 AM] Journeyman: I got it
[1:38:48 AM] Journeyman: Pinkie wraps herself in ribbons for Twilight
[1:38:54 AM] Journeyman: Under the tree, while naked
[1:39:05 AM] PIzor: and has a dick
[1:39:08 AM] PIzor: or something
[1:40:35 AM] PIzor: no wait it would only make the front page if it was some combo of luna
[1:40:45 AM] PIzor: no one likes pinkie :(
[1:41:01 AM] Journeyman: And it's for Celestia
[1:41:19 AM] PIzor: boom
[1:41:21 AM] PIzor: hop to it
[1:41:32 AM] PIzor: doesn't even have to be more than 2k words
[1:41:41 AM] PIzor: call it Lunas xmas booty or something dumb
[1:41:51 AM] PIzor: or stuffing a stocking
[1:41:54 AM] Journeyman: Dude, how much cocke do I have to snort to finish it in 48 hours? I have to work
[1:41:54 AM | Edited 1:42:01 AM] Journeyman: Dude, how much coke do I have to snort to finish it in 48 hours? I have to work
[1:41:55 AM] PIzor: idgaf
[1:42:05 AM] PIzor: hahaha
[1:42:07 AM] PIzor: nice edit bruh
[1:42:10 AM] Journeyman: you saw nothing
[1:42:15 AM] PIzor: I Saw it ALL
[1:42:30 AM] PIzor: the answer to both is "enough"
[1:49:45 AM] PIzor: aight good luck with your slap dash story
[1:49:56 AM] PIzor: let me know if you need an editor or somethin
[1:50:04 AM] PIzor: peace out

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This is literally all the thought that went into this, all on Christmas Eve.

(looks at fic. Shakes heard)"...only on the Internet."

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[1:41:41 AM] PIzor: call it Lunas xmas booty or something dumb

Luna's Xmas Booty: Electric Boogaloo

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Uh huh.

This is not only the response to a bet, but an experiment of mine. I want to see how well a terrible story can do.

For science.

I gotta give you props, you completed the challenge like a goddamn champion :raritywink:

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This is all your fault.

Comment posted by Steel Resolve deleted Aug 29th, 2017

...cadience...was... IN ON IT? :rainbowlaugh:
that would of made for an interesting "conversation" later

It's written competently enough, but it's just straight sex. If you told me two years ago that someday straight incest would bore me, I... would probably believe you. Stuff gets old. 6770189

For what it's worth, my suggestion was gay sex between Shiny and one of his groomstallions from the wedding.

Not much else to say... Nice story. Remember when you were nervous about your first clopfic, and ended up with an erotic massage tale? Your descent into blatantly lewd fetish porn with atrophied-if-any plot is progressing as planned. :trollestia:

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Atrophied? If there's plot here, please point it out. I can't find it.

But yeah, I didn't try that hard for this one. Wanted to see how well a crappy story would be received. Strangely well, it seems. I don't know what that says about me or the fanbase here on fimfiction, that I made it or people like it.

6768519 Well, she IS the princess of love and incest is TECHNICALLY a form of love so.....

Plus, from what it sounds like, they did grow up together so each probably knows the other two's kinks. :twilightblush:

Cadence. I don't know how to describe you.:rainbowderp:

6770595 I don't know if it helps any since this is just my own opinion and I don't speak for the majority of the site's users, but shit, so long as it's written coherently I'm not picky about what clop I read.

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It's nothing too bad or self-depreciating, but I find it kinda ironic that the story I put the least effort into is getting the most attention.

6777831 love goddess:trollestia: nuff said.

Twilight’s ? length hair tickled his groin.

? = word missing here?

Sensing an opportunity, le lifted his hand to his mouth and sucked off a finger,

He

Little by little he seesawed his cock into her sister’s inviting depths.

'his sister's' or cut out the 'sister's'.

He someone cry his name and liquid warmth envelope his dick before the damn broke.

Huh?

Speaking would ruin the moment, so as Twilight nestled into her brother’s warm chest, he encircled her dear sister just to hold her close for a little while longer.

his

I hope you like my present. XOXOXOXO

FROM: Cadance

Well someone had to tie Twi up!

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There is a sequel named that now just for you.

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I'm just that good.

Lovely presentation of how love cares little about the boundaries set by the society around you:eeyup:

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Actions can be stronger than words sometimes when people need to show how much they care.

savoured the the moment

so he had one hand firmly

I hope you like my present. XOXOXOXO
FROM: Cadance
*Does spit take and laughs* :rainbowlaugh:

" Each was reduced to the most bass of needs. " WUB WUB Commander.

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