Gonna' start reading this one - it's just recently caught my eye. Yet, something about it perplexes me. Your chapter lengths are... Well, some would say long (though I am inclined to say wonderful), yet you have almost no Thumbs Up, and almost half as many down votes. I find this troubling, because I doubt that anyone could write so much without: A) having a care for grammar and spelling, and B) having a premise that is, at least in their mind, captivating. Thus, I am immensely curious.
1384860 The story fell victim to a massive troll attack the day it was posted. It doomed its popularity. The first night, first chapter it was 10 downvotes, 9 upvotes, plus some 15 comments 14 of which were two trolls throwing insults back and forth. It might have been that the first chapter might have suffered a bit of "sequelitis" due to tie-ins with "Upon the Stars". But I think it would mean constant inflow of up- and downvotes in roughly the same proportions ever since, and instead the next 15 votes were universally "up".
The chapter lengths - I try staying at half the usual size of Fallout:Equestria and I still question if it's a right size - I could easily bundle 1+2, 3+4 and (upcoming) 5+6 into very self-contained entities of "three royal visits". Although 7 and 8 (which will conclude the story) will be quite apart.
As for style and grammar, I'll let you judge yourself once you start reading it.
1385286 Am in the middle of reading Upon the Stars at the moment, and while I think that the romance itself progresses a little too quickly - but hey, it's the one-night-stand to end all one-night-stands - if it's any indicator of how good your writing is, then I should definitely enjoy this.
I see its big , and it looks interesting.
But i will just wait for it to finish to read it. Good luck writing it.
wow, I should have gone to bed an hour ago.DAMN This story is Good!
Gonna' start reading this one - it's just recently caught my eye. Yet, something about it perplexes me. Your chapter lengths are... Well, some would say long (though I am inclined to say wonderful), yet you have almost no Thumbs Up, and almost half as many down votes. I find this troubling, because I doubt that anyone could write so much without: A) having a care for grammar and spelling, and B) having a premise that is, at least in their mind, captivating. Thus, I am immensely curious.
1384860
The story fell victim to a massive troll attack the day it was posted. It doomed its popularity. The first night, first chapter it was 10 downvotes, 9 upvotes, plus some 15 comments 14 of which were two trolls throwing insults back and forth. It might have been that the first chapter might have suffered a bit of "sequelitis" due to tie-ins with "Upon the Stars". But I think it would mean constant inflow of up- and downvotes in roughly the same proportions ever since, and instead the next 15 votes were universally "up".
The chapter lengths - I try staying at half the usual size of Fallout:Equestria and I still question if it's a right size - I could easily bundle 1+2, 3+4 and (upcoming) 5+6 into very self-contained entities of "three royal visits". Although 7 and 8 (which will conclude the story) will be quite apart.
As for style and grammar, I'll let you judge yourself once you start reading it.
1385286 Am in the middle of reading Upon the Stars at the moment, and while I think that the romance itself progresses a little too quickly - but hey, it's the one-night-stand to end all one-night-stands - if it's any indicator of how good your writing is, then I should definitely enjoy this.