Why such a good story got so little attention? Quite a few of the highly rated ones are plainly worse than this. Is it because it's clopfic? It doesn't seem that this is the reason - there are a lot of other ones that are just badly written senseless clop, without in-depth character building and story line, with stupid, unrealistic and unimaginative dialogues and scenes, and they are way higher in rating. I'm angry right now.
P.S. Sorry for the bad english. /I keep saying that, because I have been told more than once that my grammar is relatively OK, but my choice of words is not so good, and usually it's the other way around, so instead of looking like non-native English speaker, which I am, I look like a native-english speaking retard :) / Anyway, I like the story a lot so far. I really should get some sleep, but instead I can't stop reading.
The proposal, the detonated bathroom, the... well the everything. This is glorious. Deep deep deep characterizations and often hilarious without being a comedy. Great stuff. Onward.
WOW...
also...
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Wow this story is good. A shame it got trolled. Keep writing man! Cheers.
Why such a good story got so little attention? Quite a few of the highly rated ones are plainly worse than this. Is it because it's clopfic? It doesn't seem that this is the reason - there are a lot of other ones that are just badly written senseless clop, without in-depth character building and story line, with stupid, unrealistic and unimaginative dialogues and scenes, and they are way higher in rating. I'm angry right now.
P.S. Sorry for the bad english. /I keep saying that, because I have been told more than once that my grammar is relatively OK, but my choice of words is not so good, and usually it's the other way around, so instead of looking like non-native English speaker, which I am, I look like a native-english speaking retard :) /
Anyway, I like the story a lot so far. I really should get some sleep, but instead I can't stop reading.
The proposal, the detonated bathroom, the... well the everything.
This is glorious. Deep deep deep characterizations and often hilarious without being a comedy. Great stuff.
Onward.