What? No comments? SWEET!

...Haters gonna hate. I love this story, (that and i have an odd thing for zebras... theyre just so AWESOME!) But there was one part i couldn't understand wtf was going on... other than that i loved it!

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Which one? It may need correcting...

I admire your evident prowess in the field of computer science, it clearly shows you know what you are doing. As a matter a fact I almost enjoyed being confused by the programming terminology. As a supporter of this story, I want to say that you should keep in mind that these are immortal princesses, and they shouldn't be portrayed as average individuals overcoming the common problems in life. I understand that it is easier to relate to a character if s/he is going through the same issues as you, but there are just some parts in the story that just make me think the princesses are fallacious. Other than that, your grammar is very close to flawless, and you have a good sense of plot (tee hee). Good luck on any future endeavors.

head.... hurts.... too much computer stuff....

My God I almost forgot im only two chapters in. So long. So much story.
ITS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!

Can you explain the time dilation for me?

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I can since I use it in my chatroom it's basically a multiple or divider. as an example if you have the ratio at 1000 to 1 that would me for every 1000 years that pass only 1 second would pass ( or however you want to arrange the time segments) and if it was 1 to 1000 it would mean for every second that passes 1000 years would pass

Amazing... two chapters in and it would have been a wonderful point to end a wonderful story. So much more!

A burden weighing me down forever was lifted off my back. I cried out in a sudden relief, an ache of centuries suddenly removed.
I raised my neck, bent it far back like a swan in a sudden rush of freedom I had long forgotten.
I opened my eyes.
I saw Nadir by me on the bed, with my horse collar upon his neck, an expression of effort on his face. He lifted his neck, heavily. I saw how hard it was on him, but he managed a smile. “No wonder I could match you in fight if you wear a handicap like this.”

This has to be one of the best scenes with Celestia I've ever come across. Brilliant.

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I see someone's on a reading spree of my stories
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