Fear makes strangers of us all.
Discord goes on a vacation, granting Rainbow some of his powers!
All hell breaks loose Everypony has a good laugh!
Please... I honestly don't know what my original idea even was after I finished this story...
Edit: WHAT THE HELL HOW DID THIS GET FEATURED.
THIS WAS MY FIRST STAB AT COMEDY WAT.
Edit #2: Now with a sequel! Fluttershy Builds An Ark!
Featured: September 5th, 2016?!?!
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Meh, its alright, the writting could be more refined so as to be clear which character is talking at the moment, but what i do like is how you imagine each scene and able to expressively depict it in the form of words. Congrats, you earn a like and a fav tag.
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I won't upvote it, but I won't downvote it either. It's kind of meh.
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I wrote it on a whim... It's meant to be bad (I think)
7539399 No need to defend yourself. I won't judge you on one story that is just "okay". No worries, I was just trying to give my input, even though it isn't much.
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Nononono, I must say I appreciate your input! It is my first hack at a comedy, and I don't really know how it turned out... So yeah.
(Be brutally honest: how comedic or bad was it? If you wouldn't mind, that is)
Son...
Rarity would never say "Not in that get up."
This isn't 3,000 words long.
This story was hilarious!
Huh, sounds like it would've been interesting.
I came because of the story picture
I stayed because of the description
I read the first chapter because some higher power I can't describe convinced me reading this was a must. Also, I think I just saw my Pinkie plushie move. By itself. Uh.
aaaa okay haha
Congrats on disassembling thousands of fics about pegasus magic!
KEEP WRITING! The writing itself could use some work but it's also very creative, like Prince Techiar said. It's an intriguing writing style.
I agree.
What the hell did I just read?
In all seriousness, it was a funny concept—if there even was an original concept—and the character interactions were amusing, but the writing itself could definitely use some work. If it was meant to be a crackfic of sorts, you did a decent job, since some of it was actually done fairly well. If not, well, then there's definitely some work that could've been done to make it more readable in a few ways.
I'm on the fence here. Definitely not deserving of a downvote, but I don't think I can upvote, either. Keep writing—you'll get better.
PS: Potential bad pun of the day— "And Chaos Reins"
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*distant groaning from bad pun*
Well, yeah, it sort of was the first story of it's kind that I made... And as I always say, I love criticism! So thanks!
I also finished it last night without editing any of it really so... Heh
This was a great story!
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7540286 Haha!
That was crazy. I love it.
When you're rife with devistation, there's a simple explanation, you're a toy maker's creation, trapped inside a crystal ball.
And which ever way he tilts it, know that we must be resilient, we won't let them break our spirits as we sing our silly song.
Was that a monty python reference?
Am I the only one thinking of Bruce Almighty right now?
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How does one decipher such a story?
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I don't know... Are you?
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One does not know how to decipher such a story.
7540613 I mean, come on, a god takes a day off and gives the first person (or pony) they meet his powers??? It's pretty obvious.
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Aw, come on. Why you gotta remove all the fun out of the premise?
(I watched Bruce Almighty right before getting this idea. It... didn't turn out as I thought it would.)
7540669 Woah woah, I'm not saying that's a bad thing, the fandom needed something like this .
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I know right? And no, I'm not taking it as a bad thing.
When I searched for the same premise, I didn't find anything so I was like why not?
...
Da heck Ah jus read?
That being said, wow. Just wow. This was fun. I needed this.
Dude i think you just broke the 8th wall
Interesting. A few laughs here and there. Certainly worth a read.
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The 8th wall?! Le gasp!
Love it, and hoping for a sequel! If you feel like it, that is. Because forcing yourself to write something never works.
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Very true indeed! Don't worry, something's coming...
I liked the premise better than the story.
Seriously, read the title, saw the cover, read the description. I genuinely laughed.
But then, this was my expression while reading:
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Thanks for your honesty! To be fair, this is my first attempt at comedy... And I was half asleep at the time I wrote this. It sort of just took a weird turn and you get what you see. Cheers for reading!
P.S. There seems to be nothing where you said your face looked like, unless your face was actually blank.
Hmm, half of the time I literally did not know what was Happening, but nice story.
7539407 Um, I can't remember it all very well, since I read it a couple nights ago and I was really tired, but I think I chuckled a bit at least.
7541807 It's short enough that the randomness isn't overdone. Though at this point I think you need to do a short one shot of what happened when Twilight got high because that sounds hilarious.
Hey, congrats on your first feature!
I love crud like this!
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Thanks!
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I give it a solid meh. Too much random, not enough chaos.
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Hence the random tag
I would have added this story to my favorites for just this one line, but you went above and beyond and made the entire story hilarious. Furthermore, you just obliterated the Fourth Wall, and that's always bonus points in my book.
Thanks for writing this. It made laugh.
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Thanks! Have a Fluttershy!
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There's already a story where Twilight gets high (I think...let me go check...It has been a while, and for all I know, it's been removed from the site...)
I have reviewed this HERE.
O_O
WTF just happened...
Nothing like some chaos magic to spice up your day!