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There are structural grammar issues here, like this beast in the first paragraph
This could use a proofread to clean up runons and incomplete sentences.
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Shit, didn't even notice. If you have the time I'd appreciate it.
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I should probably mention this is a request but thanks, glad you somewhat liked it.
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Uh... Whoa. Um... Well, I am currently making a story on how the ponies got to Earth but I wasn't offended or anything I was just uh... Huh. Okay then. Again, thank you for commenting. Your feedback is definitely appreciated as is everyone's.
That was actually very good, you succeed definitely. But there where a few grammar issues, missing letters, etc.
Nice!
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I'm dusting it up now. Glad you enjoyed it regardless!
So glad we got another Human X Glimmer fic. There’s practically none, which sucks.
Mmph, yes! Finally a GlimGlam action on 2nd person
You somehow made me, who doesn't like humanxpony stories, melt by picturing Starlight being cradled. The relationship is written so sweet and romantic.
I also note the use of the tail during the scene. Very few clopfics ever involves the tail during 'the moment', that's quite creative, and hot
Overall, this is a great story, even though humanxpony it's something I don't really like.
PS: You might want to put a human tag, because it's kinda misleading.
So what's with the Y/N thing? Is that a placeholder for a name, or am I missing something? Just seems out of place really.
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I've seen it used in many 2nd person things, usually meaning 'Your name' instead of giving the main character, who is you, a set name.
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This was beautiful!
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Well thanks for saying so! Glad you like it!
This is good. I really enjoyed it
but............ Slacks. Really? Is the human 105 years old because if not he really shouldn't be using the word slacks
This was a good clop fic.
But something I’m prefixed on is the world it’s set in. Is it an alternate Earty where Ponies and Humans made first contact? If so, how long have they interacted? Stuff like that makes you wonder.
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Funny you should ask, cause I'm writing a fic somewhat explaining that. Kinda.
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Nice. I’ll have to give it a look.
Just a suggestion, but you may want to put the Alt Universe tag, just to be on the safe side, since this is a human and pony world, not just a human in Equestria one.
Nope, don't say anymore. I already know who it is. XD
And after finishing the reading, my verdict is...yay
I very much enjoyed it, and I could see the passion and lust building between the two of them, and just blowing over them like so much lava, it was burning. In a good way of course. Anyways, full likes and this is going to my top favs, well done again.
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Thank you for your input and praise, I greatly appreciate you even giving my story a look and am beyond joyous that you enjoyed it so greatly.
I may have been a few yearts late, but i liked it. Big greeting from Russia.