Hello everyone! My name is... Well, I go by many names. Misfortune, Insanity, Madness, but many of you probably know me as Discord. I would like to show you that I have genuinely changed by bringing you on a trip through a day of my new life here, in my new home in Ponyville.
A/N: I've been dying to write a story about Discord and then, I got this idea. Hilarity ensues.
~CloudCrusher Signing Off!~
I love the idea of Discord talking and arguing with the narrator, I feel like that idea could work really well. Maybe just make it a bit clearer when the narrator is speaking but other than that a great start.
Discord should pull a Deadpool and start killing everyone in the fictional universe, then the author of the story, in a rebellion against his writer overlords.
4157904 Maybe next time dude, but not this fic. I made it to be family friendly, save for the rare curse word here or there.
4157807 Perhaps putting the narrator's speech in italics or bolded would help somehow?
A minor error I saw, but other than that great story so far.
4167239 Oh wow, nice catch! I'll fix it lickety split! Thanx
Nice
That's the word that describe this. Nice
The play between Discord and the Narrator is awesome
You're doing a very well done job here, keep on
I gonna put two corrections here, they are minimal things, but it help
Somepony*
That part must be going whitout the Italic
That's all
4187791 To answer the second 'accident', that is the narrator actually speaking. Like, the narrator's voice in Discord's head as he speaks to him directly.
4189984
Ok, i didn't see it that way Anyway good story
4191347 Thanks buddy! ^^
His RIGHT arm's the lion's paw...
You address a very real issue in this chapter. Thank you. Where did "fleek" even come from? I liked it. Narrator, curb thy tounge. Discord's a-talkin'.
6387224 Thank you very much for saying so, I'm glad you enjoyed.