This story is a sequel to Dear Rarity
I do not know of its name. But i do know it is my god. And in return of being allowed to live i must do my part in the circle of this painful life.
And that is
FEED.
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This is the last story of this little series of oneshots.
And if you need a hint on what this monster is based off of-
Hint: its based of a native american monster/myth
No more of this series and if you want more horror please look through my library and there is a bookshelf called oneshots where i have a few more horror story's laying around
So thank you for reading and please come back soon...
I have more story's to tell
Best editor ever : DragonHistorian
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This was a great series. Thanks for it.
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Aww thx
And your welcome
Im going to have a slightly different perspective on this because I actually read this trilogy in reverse order. I started with Dear God and ended with Dear Diary. I liked it and feel that your a very imaginative author. The first and third stories feel finished and fleshed out, but the middle story while good, feels more like an outline or a framework. It has a somewhat rushed feeling. I saw on your first story comments that you weren't very happy with the second story. Never forget that you can always go back and modify it. You could always add additional Rarity flashbacks or Rarity "point of view" as she mulls over passages from the diary.
Anyway you cut it, You put out a nice story that had fun reading.
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Thank you!
And i am planning on writing more scary story's similar to the 1st/3rd of this trillogy
if you want more horror just go to my oneshots bookshelf in my library and i have one or two more horror themed story's laying around
Oh, wait, is she a skinwalker?
If so, that's pretty cool!
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Thats one of the inspirations yes
but there is also a second one but for the most part you are correct
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So its confirmed that Angel is the 1 responsible for Sweetie's death, actually we knew from the start but just pointing that out and Rarity i dunno what happened to her, Rarity reminds me of a story I've read called Penpal but its very damn long
Wait, if a demon is in Ponyville and just killed a filly, that means....DON'T CALL THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY, PRINCESS'S OR WHATEVER!!!!!
CALL OVERWATCH TO HALP US!!!!!!!!!!!
Good story, and I felt a teensy weensy bit bad for the evil demon. Only a little!!
Cool story bro.
~Leonzilla
Is this story based off of a Skinwalker ?
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Thx
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Yes as well as another native american myth but your pretty much correct
I dunno, this was good, but I kinda feel that if we come to understand a monster, they become less scary.
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Exactly
It is the last story of this mini series so might as well leave it off where every thing is explained
7503990 oh ok
7501974 The monster is a skinwalker/wendigo
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DING DING DING WE GOT A WINNER!
7507005 Skinwalker Wendigo?
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Are you trying to steal the winners idea? Just google it if you don't know it. That simple.
Ok, so I read this trilogy out of order but it came to me like that so deal with it.
I like the premise and the set-up but a lot of the "horror" aspect fell flat for me. So the other two stories are not so great but this one does wonders by letting the monster do all the talking. And that's what sold it for me. Just getting the chance to sit in a skinwalker's point-of-view turns everything on its head. Although I might be biased because I love folklore and ghost stories.
And yes I understand that this is a hybrid of a skinwalker and a wendigo combined into one but I'd say it's more the former than the latter.
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Thank you for the kind words and the helpful criticism
7512745 It's a question out of confusion numbnuts.
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Rude.
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Aww thanks
i enjoyed this trilogy, but not as much as i enjoyed the first one! i think it was a great idea to have different points of view for each one
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i have a few other one-shots laying around as well as a few chapter storys as well if you would like to read them
Thank you it means alot
This story was great! Have a follow, I'd like to see more of your work.
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Daw thx
i have a few other one-shots laying around as well as a few chapter storys as well if you would like to read them
though some arnt horror
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Sure, I'll check them out sometime.
I just want to know who the fuck this "God" is and why he does allow this creature to live.
Wendigo! I only know two myths, and Wendigoes is one of them! I only know it because Until Dawn.
Edit: Ok, I just read the story. I have no idea what this is! Yay! Part Wendigo? Because it feels heat and not cold?
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Ugleth Tama.
Misfortuned feeding.
Anything that holds remorse is forced to endure life as a monstrous game of cat and mouse.
You are protected from the normal creatures if you hide in plain sight by either wearing the flesh after feeding or by draining prey and using that energy to keep the mice at bay.
But you must do one or the other, you cannot hide or run forever as you need to feed, don't you?
You cannot simply die, for Ugleth Tama will have Its prey as well, and It likes to play with Its food, like a cat, and a mouse.
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welcome to my side of the inter-webs child
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I've read you before.
good story. i was very scared at the end.
Let me guess, is it a skin walker? I could have done some reserch.
God is spelt with a capital G.
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I doubt hers is the same, though.
God is spelt with a capital G