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Mutter_Butter


All I can do is draw.... welp, at least I'm partially decent at it.

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Aw, that's adorable! Horrible fleshy monsters just want cuddles too, is that so much to ask?

That was pretty good! The build-up and descriptions were super well done and, although I knew what was coming due to the horror tag, the twist was done perfectly! Reminds we of a creepypasta. Although, if Rarity knew the entire time that it wasn't Opal, why did she call it Opel...... Oh, wait! She was pretending it was Opal to trick herself so she wouldn't panic! Genius! :pinkiehappy:

I also appreciate that this was a horror story without any... explicit content, like pointless gore and torture. It was simple and subtle. I love it! Have a favorite and a like, my friend. :twilightsmile:

I don't quite get it, but it set my heart into a bit of a flutter. Good enough to give it a like.

:duck: Spike! You're not fooling anypony with that silly costume especially me!
:moustache: I'm over here outside your window....
:raritycry:
:facehoof: Spike I thought I raised you better....
:moustache: only the best...
:duck: Of course !
:moustache: George I know your scared of 'things' but Fluttershys cabin is by the Everfree...

Awwwww, Rarity make a new furry friend!

A very nice fic (and it's your first!). I'm having a good feeling about your writing.

8115653 You won't have good feelings about my procrastination. :rainbowwild:

8115746 I'm already too concerned about my own procrastination to worry about yours. :raritywink:

It's nice to read a traditional horror scenario like this one once and a while. While short, the story certainly left me with unease, good job!

Kittens... kittens everywhere.

Me likey! Great job!

Y'know... I haven't slept with my feet uncovered ever since I read this story.

XD The chapter says 1004 words but the total says 708

Yikes! I've read a story like this! It's creepy every time!

I have only one thing to say to Rarity: You're screwed, you're totally screwed.

The ending made me lol :rainbowlaugh: I love it

Aw them little hoof biters! Lol :pinkiehappy:

...........yikes........:twilightoops:
I will never leave my feet uncovered again.

10776290
Bruhh.
That's awesome. I had no idea about this. :raritystarry:

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Not surprised >.<
You’d be amazed how many fic readers don’t tell the author

Ok. THAT last sentence got me.
At least... she... was being gentle.

aw...Opal had kittens!

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traditional horror? What do you mean by that? As far as I'm aware, traditional horror is things like vampires! At least, I'm pretty sure that something that's coming from 1966 counts as traditional

That word count looks off. I'm not entirely sure if it is though, as I have no idea how the two word counts count the amount of words in a story, or even if they are both word counts. It's entirely possible that the one on the same line as the chapter title is actually a letter count as far as I know. Granted, there would still be something off about it

Woohoo! Free pet!

Wierd, this story is less than a thousand words, it must have been from before you had to have at least thousand words to publish a story.

Oh boy....that's a pretty good twist! It's spooky! :pinkiegasp:

My only question is how did this story get approved? It's not 1,000 words long. Not that I'm complaining of course. Still worth it.

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Im not sure.
It might be a glitch
The first time i tried to post this, I couldn't because of the minimum word limit. So I edited it to have the correct amount, but it says less than 1000 for some reason.

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Great little story that could easily fit right into Alvin Schwartz's Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark series. :raritywink: (Found you from Lynwood's profile pic, a good artist is you.)

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