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Applejack stumbles upon Rarity late one night inside Twilight Sparkle's castle.

Neiiiiiigh.

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Feels like I was there but shouldn't be. Forgive me for my rudeness.

D A M M I T F O U R T H S

O-oh my...

Wow, Rarity is a sharp, cunning mare! Stealing ribbons, stealing :heart:s
I'll better go and grab a shot of insulin now.

Thanks,
-frozen

Well played Rarity, well played.

This was a cute one-shot.

Whatever this was all about, I upvoted it. Hopefully my thumbs up will build the foundation of a vast stairway (or at least a modest escalator) of approval leading to the feature box, where it can hopefully confuzzle others in equal or greater measure.

applepone
marshmellowly
snargl

Dammit skirts, be gentle on my heart.

Orange freckles... freckled.

Best line. I'd like to see more of this action in the future.

7432186 I hope you're happy with yourself, fourths. >:/

7432218 You know I am.

She flew back so hard that her neck nearly suffered pony whiplash... which is like regular whiplash but with more surprised neighing.

Just an example of the funny prose used in this piece. Seriously, though, I found the writing style very amusing.

Been a damn long time since I've stumbled upon a simply cute Rarijack fic that just played around with these types of silly temptational situations we sometimes find ourselves in. Simply cute. Simply fun.

Much hawt. Very ship.

Goddamn I haven't read anything this purple out of you since BP

I approve of you using your astronomical powers for good fluffy shipping.

The purple knights riding a purple worm as their bard rolled nothing but nat 20's on performance checks to compose the most flowery of all poetry would look at this and be blinded by the purple prose positively pulsing out of this story


....And I love it...

I could go to my local bakery and eat every last bite of blissful baked goodness, to the point of licking frosting remnants from the display cases and it still wouldn't be as sweet this fic. Well played.

Fourths!!!

oh goddamnit

I think you made Caesar jealous.

I absolutely love the writing style and moreover the content. You never fail to please, Skirts, Pony on.

I reviewed this story as part of Read It Now Reviews #88.

My review can be found here.

Well this was...

ah damn this was real good.
The language of description was hilarious, yet so apt.

the applepone

Really?

> One Thousand One Hundred and Seventy-Eight Words

> first 9 are all "clop"

...Dammit, skirts.

Well written and very, very well done! Sly Rarity is sly pone!

Oh... Umm... She... Uh... Yeah... Alright... Really?

Seven vague kinda words to sum four-thousand-seven-hundred-twelve-over-four kinda words.

That freckle action got me shook lmao

But in all seriousness great story :)

7435626 *sighs Dissapointedly* Oh fourths. whatever will we do with you.

Clever girl...

So, did you come up with the title before or after writing the story? :rainbowwild:

Rarity, you sly vixen.

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