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AkumaKami64


Insane, Reality-Warping Chaos God? Warring and Reunniting Siisters of the Day and Night? Vague backstories? How was I suppose to resist? My Patreon!

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This should proove an intriguing read, at the very least...

holly fuck this is so Dark ....... I LOVE IT !!
so cool!! VERY curious to read more ^^

poor Discord

Honestly, if I were soon-to-be strife I'd probably end up warning someone that, once I'd got at least some of the chaos magic to work, I would curse twilight to be immortal but never be remembered. Essentially she would be forgotten by everyone and no one( except for me) would be able to know or learn who she is/was. Similar but opposite. A somewhat fitting punishment for essentially mind-killing my previous self.

Wow...
An update...
I'm genuinely surprised...
But,

YES! AN UPDATE! FINALLY! WOOHOO!

Love this latest chapter. I hope to see more.

I really liking this story so far; it's talking about an interesting subject while going into detail about how such a fucked up situation would be handled. Furthermore, I love how you're handling Strife; I came into this worried that you'd take the "Amnesiacs are innocent" approach; This angry and nervous thing far more interesting. With how you've sest things up here, it feels like things can go in a multitude of directions; despite what's been said, it sounds like Discord returning is an actual possibility

I hope we get to see more mini-flashbacks to Twilight's and Strife's first meeting; seeing everyone slowly realize what happened will be quite interesting.

Glad to see this get an update, I really find this story interesting to see :)

I like Strife's reactions and how he's not "innocent" like how beings in these situations usually are.

The god of chaos losing his memory for now? That's seriously a bad thing, Equestria is bucked if he get's furious.

"Note to self, go find a bukem later,"

...Given the context of the previous sentence, I have a terrifying suspicion that "bukem" means "library".

It's great to have you back! This is honestly one of the more interesting stories on this site, good writing, great narrative, and tons of potential! I wish you the best and hope to see more!

Holy shit it's back! Great story wish I could like more than once. The twilight situation is pretty bad, huh. She caused identity death to a great being so obviously she deserves pretty harsh punishment,but on the other hand she's the element of Magic, a powerful artifact that will theoretically be needed to conflict with potentially world ending threats. So any punishment she serves can't be something that'd permanently keep her from saving the world. There's no really ideal solution here. The only punishment I can think up is to trap her in stone for a period of time and then let her out if she's needed? Dunno, looking forward to how that situation turns out though!

Hmmm. Given she's an Element of Harmony and a hero, it seems to me that the proper punishment shoukd be a two-parter. First is having her own status as nobility revoked and to be put on eternal probation. She'd be required to have mandatory screenings and checkups, and oversight on everything she does to be allowed to do anything that isn't sitting in a prison cell or being assigned some scholarly job she has to do or else.

If those watching her say she fails to measure up, then and only then will she be subjected to one of the aformentioned punishments of magic sealing, life imprisonment, dehorning, execution, ect.

NmB

The story is getting better and better,

Dude, this fic us INSANE. The entire premise is insane twilight "killing" discord and the husk left behind figuring out who they want to be? Stellar. The subtle horror of everyone else's POV's as they watch strife figure out existing 10/10.
You should be really proud of yourself man

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